You know, this reminded me of something and I needed a while to think of what. It reminds me of a fic where Itachi came back to Konoha, apparently pardoned or something I can't remember, and he and Sasuke lived in the same house. Sasuke was still obsessed with his brother, and it spilled over into his sexual fantasies, and Itachi found out. Oh, and I like Deidara was involved. Have you read that fic? It could easily serve as a sequel to this. Maybe you and that author should collaborate.

Creepily, this is a little too realistic. Squicky and very possibly it could really have happened.

Sick and good. Like.

"It's almost obvious that you'd think of the Uzumaki boy," Orochimaru snickered, "Your self appointed savior. How much of that do you believe?"

"None of it," Sasuke breathed the lie easily and arched a little into the touch.

"It's too obvious," Orochimaru mused, pulling back and tipping Sasuke's face up, his knuckles under the boy's chin, "I know the way you've been shrinking your heart. There's only room left for one person in there, Sasuke-kun." and here he gripped Sasuke's chin firmly in his hand, enjoying the way the boy's eyes went wild and dark all at once, "No, you'd think of your brother."

That was totally fucked up.

I loved it

xoxoxooxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

xXSadistic BitchXx

I've been gaining a rather strange affection for Orochimaru recently. This fic pretty much compounds everything I like about him into one.

Loved the ending, too. A mixture of 'serves him right' and 'he was blatantly asking for that'.

Thanks for writing!

This was goooooooood.

Great job. You have Orochimaru down to the last strand.

slightly freaky that was but brilliantly done

This has to be just about the single most perfect Orochimaru fic I've ever read. You've got all four relationships down spot on. Thanks for a great insight into a great character.

Very interesting to read and amazingly well written! _ Heh I loved the last line. Very, very nice work! :D

Woah...nice.

Interesting... I like it

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Awesome! -

I liked the last sentence. It was cool!

The last line is absolute win. It's a spot-on piece that is brilliantly written.