| Reviews for Over The Hills |
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   neko-jin72 chapter 4 . 7/18/2009 hi, i was just wondering if you were planning on finishing this story? it's really good, and i wanna find out what happens next. please continue this! |
| RosalieHale122 chapter 4 . 12/17/2008 o please write more! This story is brill! And you've caught the characters brilliantly, just keep writing! |
| ForeverDarkRider chapter 4 . 12/8/2008 I absolutely LOVE your story. It is probably in my top three fave Beyblade fics of all time! Please update it soon! *pleading look* ~KR |
| Party in the Afterlife chapter 4 . 3/4/2008 This is really good. PLEASE UPDATE! |
| dustyVHS chapter 4 . 12/27/2007 hey, when i first starting reading and i got to the point where Ray shows his bruises the first thing that popped up in my mind was abuse of some sort. Since you show Ray as someone who's, well...in desperate need of a job and/or money, i thought maybe it was going in a direction where he was working in a bar? i dunno :D but since you said you needed help, I'm more than glad to! -TalaTati19 |
| PleiadesWolfe chapter 4 . 11/19/2007 Kai you had better do something fast and expect to explain where you went to and why. Don't let anything more happen to Ray. |
| PleiadesWolfe chapter 1 . 11/19/2007 But why did Kai leave in the first place and what kind of trouble has Ray gotten himself into? |
| Dreams-of-Mine chapter 4 . 8/26/2007 Baka Rei Baka Rei Baka Rei Baka Rei Baka Rei Baka Rei Baka Rei Baka Rei! Why didn't you accept the help! I bet you that because of that, you are going to get in the brink of death situation and kai's going to safe you and you STILL aren't going to tell him! That sounds like you, Rei Kong, would do just to be stubborn! *glare* Great job on the chapter, please update soon! |
| Seer Vixion chapter 4 . 7/26/2007 oh wow I am glad that Ray ran... but i am kinda sad too...why did kai leave in the first place? |
| ShaShiSar221 chapter 4 . 7/25/2007 This is the first really good Beyblade fic I've read in a long time. I really enjoyed reading it plz update soon. |
| AISverse chapter 4 . 7/21/2007 oh wow. i could never imagine what Ray must be going through right now. so wait a minute... he never told Kai that he loved him? so all this while, Kai was...like, didn't know about all this? man...i wonder where the story will go from here. i'll be waiting! |
| Reis1gurl chapter 4 . 7/21/2007 great chapter! keep up the great work! im looking forward to the next update! :) |
| darksaphire chapter 4 . 7/19/2007 i just KNOW something bad's gonna happen. i hope rei isn't in an abusive relationship. |
| Yume no Anime chapter 4 . 7/19/2007 I think Kai should kidnap Rei to his place when the nekojin's asleep. Go to Kai Rei! |
| Rio 2.0 chapter 4 . 7/19/2007 Poor Ray... Silly Kai. ... (insert ramble here) Huh... Well, I can't say I really... ever... watched the show... But I don't think your Ray is a "pitiful sack of sorrow". I rather like him. As for where you want to go... well... How long do you want it to be? Happy ending? Sad ending? Angst? Kai's POV? I dunno if questions help you... at all... but I suck at actual advise so... - Anyways, Still love this story! Looking forward to an update! BV |
