I remember when jasper thought it was his fault. When we all thought that bella was dead.

Edward told me later that all he was thinking was: "its all my fault"

That was good!

Well written and good insights. Poor Jasper. I think sometimes his power is so painful. You've captured it brilliantly. Also your introduction at the beginning really set the stage for your story. Good job!

excellent one shot, beautifully written. poor jasper...

well written, good intervals with the 'it's all my fault' but i don't really get how it's all jaspers fault... kinda confused... if you could message me back to let me know i'd love that... thanks!

Aww poor Jasper, thank god everything worked out all right, afterall.

gby

Em

Wow! One of the best one-shots I've ever read!

Wow, I mean, really...

Wow.

I can see how Jasper must've felt so much more clearly now.

Thank you for the new insight.

-sniffles- You're going to make me cry! I hate you. Hmph. I wanna give Jasper a hug. -breaks into sobs- -throws random vase at author's head- Oops. Did that hit you? ... I have cookie dough! Will you forgive me? Please?

aww poor Jasper [

Poor, poor Jasper. Sometimes I think he has the coolest power in the world, but other times I think that he has the worst. To have to feel the suffering of everyone else, on top of your own, it must be horrible.

Very well written one-shot, as always. :D

Oh, I loved this- gave me chills actually. I had never thought about it that way, you know. Jasper was never included in the equation for Bella's dive to me. Well, good job.

WOW, SO COOL, LOVE IT!

This is amazing! I officially crown you Queen. All hail.

omg...there are like tears coming down my cheeks. that was amazingly well-written