| Reviews for Murphy's Law |
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BOOOOOOOOOOOOORN chapter 10 . 5/5 LIKE I LOOKED AT THE YEAR AND EVERYTHING AND I WAS LIKE “huh he could’ve been Born that year” BUT IT DID NOT OCCUR TO ME YOU TRICKSY BASTARD |
theYEARhewasBORN chapter 9 . 5/5 i am SUPPOSED to be asleep right now but INSTEAD i am choking to death on my water bottle because IT WAS THE YEAR HE WAS BORN i went an googled when michelangelo DIED for this and then you go and rip the rug out from under me! |
Blackbandanawearer chapter 10 . 1/13 Dude I'm 13 years late. But holy shit. It was really good. Thank you for writing it. It gave me a big smile. |
Cheetachan chapter 1 . 8/22/2019 I can see this was published quite some time ago, but I couldn't leave without reviewing. This was a master piece. Every chapter kept me guessing, I couldn't put it down. I liked Vincent, especially after that talk he and Mikey had. He was right, under different circumstances he and Mike could have been friends. That's a tragedy in and of itself. At he and his brother can finally be at peace. |
ADDBaby chapter 10 . 8/5/2018 Jesus fucking Christ this was an outstanding masterpiece! I completely did not see any of this coming. Just - fucking, wow. Give your self a pat on the back and a fantastic job well done. My God, you are in deed a master of the arts themselves. You literally blow my mind |
Guest chapter 10 . 3/14/2018 Thanks for the awesome fic! Really enjoyed all the fight scenes and the heartfelt fluff was uh-ma-zing! I hope that you are doing awesome in your life! Thanks again! |
KKVixen chapter 10 . 11/20/2016 Girl, (boy?) this was amazing! I loved every minute of it. Even though I may have skipped over a speech or two by Dr. X when I lost my place on the page, I really enjoyed this. You did a really good job. Though, I kinda feel weird saying that as this was written a while ago. |
Joanne N. Grey chapter 10 . 10/31/2016 I loved this. The storyline was perfect, I didn't have to squint to see the humour (and get it), the characters were spot on, the style of writing, always leaving one wanting more... rather brilliant. I should, however, point out that you had quite a few spelling errors. Some problems with tenses. Mixing up of words. Going through it, the story that is, would do you good. That said, this was perfect. Awesome job! |
BrightLotusMoon chapter 10 . 8/30/2016 *stares* It's over. It's...done. This is the end. It's over. *deep breath* Wow. Wow. ...dear gods, wow. As a massive Michelangelo fan, as a writer who has meticulously analyzed his whole character in every incarnation, who has Mikey as a gods damn autistic special interest...I am floored. This is incredible. You're incredible. You wrote the Mikey everyone needs to see. And this story is perfect. Thank you. |
amayranni22 chapter 10 . 6/11/2016 aawwww |
EasilyDistractedBookWorm chapter 10 . 6/4/2016 I'm late to this, but it was wonderful! The characters were great and you really made me feel for the villains! Also, Dr. X... just wow. |
S. Sgriobhadaireachd chapter 10 . 4/28/2016 TMNT stories that I enjoy tend to be extremely rare considering that I'm super picky when it comes to the turtles, but this was a great story and I love it! The story was interesting and definitely not something I've seen before in other fanfiction stories, but the relationships between the brothers (especially Mikey and Raph) was what sold the story for me. I know I told you in another fic that interpersonal relationships are a huge weakness for me and that is still true in this story. I was totally freaking out the whole time that Mikey was going after his brother's weaponry and I knew that someone was going to pay when they came across their little brother so injured and all alone. You do not screw the Hamato family, not without getting some serious payback in return. In all, this was amazing and so perfectly in character! I loved it and I'm glad I found it after it was finished so I could get the full impact of the story. Thank you for writing it and I hope you have a great day! |
freefall-gypsy chapter 5 . 4/19/2016 Teme literally Translated is actually a Rude way of saying you, it is often translated as Bastard because of the Rudeness, implies the Person saying it often means YOU Bastard. ####################################################### I found that out recently so I thought I would share It; also have you read a story where Mikey gets Depressed and starts to cut himself, his Brothers find out and try to help him, and Splinter is somewhere else think he went off to a different dimension, ala Battle nexus, I had it on my favourites but it has disappeared I also had this one on my Favourites list but it disappeared and I just recently found it again. |
Wolfangel33 chapter 10 . 4/11/2016 Awesome story i loved it. And cool plot twist |
Ileidy chapter 5 . 12/26/2015 "I DON'T CARE! One armed or not, in this kitchen I am God so get the hell out!" is my favorite línea so far. |