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Ms.GingerBread117 chapter 2 . 6/12/2010 UPDATE! DON'T use an OC. Please. I will vote for Temari and Ino to be in the harem and that Naruto's mother will be dead. UPDATE QUICKLY~! |
UndeadTech-TS chapter 2 . 6/20/2009 wow, this is intense. Serves thoes village biggot, bastare, assface, motherfuckers right. all though i dont like the idea of naruto being used as a weapon, but what are you gonna do, right? so great story, please update soon, and peace out friend. |
joe1402 chapter 1 . 1/17/2009 great story canit wait 4 u to update |
Inu-Shinta chapter 2 . 10/8/2008 I would like to vote for Hana, Hinata, Yugito, and Female Haku. |
Fox Boss chapter 2 . 9/12/2008 Hana, Temari, Hinata, Yugito, and Haku. Perhaps by political marriages for Hinata/Hana and Temari? |
die blaue Rose chapter 2 . 8/6/2008 first vote would be NO HAREM! naru x fem. haku / OC and the second vote would be dead and pushing daisies. so PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I cant wait to see what'll happen next :3! |
swatkats chapter 2 . 7/11/2008 In a coma, but she wakes up, and goes to kumo to raise Naruto |
CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing chapter 2 . 6/21/2008 Hana,(This is how her name is spelled) Yugito, Haku, and OC. |
I'm. . .An Innocent Bystander chapter 2 . 6/5/2008 I vote for Haku,Yugito, kin, Sasame, and Hana for Naruto's harem and I think his mother should be in a coma, wake up, andgo to Kumo to raise her child. |
Liedral chapter 2 . 5/25/2008 Only thing I can say, is please work on your spelling and punctuation. |
IcemanXXV chapter 2 . 5/24/2008 Femhaku, Sasame, and Kin in Individual catogory. Same in Harem. and Tifa in coma, waking up, chewing the fuck out the merchants on the council, and going to Kumo for naruto. |
conlan0414863 chapter 2 . 5/24/2008 i vote for female haku |
panther73110 chapter 2 . 5/23/2008 In a coma, but she wakes up, beats up a bunch of ANBU, and goes to kumo to raise Naruto |
GhoulishCannibal chapter 2 . 5/23/2008 Well I'm happy to see that you updated your story(and people say I have a problem with tardiness) anyways I also read your reply to my review. I'm ok with changing Songai a bit( I should also say that the info on my profile is kind of old and long edied him, I'll explain in a bit) I'm cool with the whole killing each other firs then friends thing, and I don't mind tuning down the sution(At least in one part he can use the water vapors in the air or something) also I kind of noitced you took a liking to the whole mind reading thing.I would like that he keep the Cloud outfit(I kind of have a thing for it)he doesn't have a massive sword like clouds now, but only just a regular katana named Maou(Devil King)it has a black stainless steel blade with a red hilt. And I would like him to have his doujutsu(it has it's own serious weakness, I'll explain on them and if you still find it to much you can pull it.(the motion is yes I would love to have him in the story) Ok now with Songai he no longer has the vectors, he is tonned down a lot more and he has quite a lot of weaknesses. Ok one big weakness is the fact that his shield can be destroyed by a raw charka attack(like chidori or Rasangan), another being the fact his eyes are weak to genjutsu(even a D class) their so senestive to them he can suffer from temp blindness. Now the big one is that if he uses his sheild for to long he will start to get weak becasue (I borrowed the idea from Songbird a fellow writer about charka ressadue) the ressadue builds up in his shield and can't get out, so it goes back into his system casuing his internal harm( from headaches, to go as far as killing him) it pretty much works like radation sickness. Anyways I'm kind of going on so I'll finsih here(hope to hear back from you soon) and my vote is still the same with Naruto being with a female Haku, and my personal opinion about his mom should be that she's in a coma and doesn't wake up(I find the whole meeting family again, everyone is happy crap boring and unnesscary.) |
sharknight6939 chapter 2 . 5/23/2008 i choose yugito or femake haku. maybe like a harem one bcause yugito can relat as being a sealed demon in her gut as well adn haku because it alwasya good pairing |