ew pervy sage kissing his student? thats just wrong in so many ways!

I liked this story even though it was short. i liked the part where Kakashi is thinking about how his father died. Nice comparison.

Very sweetly done. I was hoping it would end in a nicely circular manner and am glad it did. Hope you write more stories about them!

Omg it's so sad, i thought i was going to cry. Its the best one shot i've ever read! so going to my favorites! and i only have one other story in my favs!

I's way better then my story on rin and kakashi! i love how arash holds rin, so sweet.

Very nice. Arashi definitely needed a kiss, don't worry. Hm, Jiraiya kissing him seemed fine, because he was his sensei. You did a great job on the guilt trip, because obviously he would feel guilty, even though it wasn't his fault.

Nice job on Rin's perspective. The part where she figured that if Kakashi was acting like this, then it was really awful was very true.

Nice beginning. I liked how you had him realize that this is how his father felt.

I thought it was very well-written and enjoyed reading it.

I loved it! Best chappy yet!

This is quite possibly the most greatest ever three shot in the entire world of fanfiction. I almost want to cry for it being over!

As far as the story goes, I think it's okay for Jiriya to have a loving side too. It's not gonna be the end of the world if Jiriya stops for a second to console his student. lol. It's cute.

I do like the continuation of the kisses.

"He smiled. "Arigatou, Ero-Sensei." The sweetest part of the chapter.

I like how you portrayed them both. "Obito died. It was their fault. They were sorry."

Just loving this fic all together. I could spend all night picking out instances that make you an awesome writer!

Great job.

-Dani

Aw... Poor Kakashi!

Nice story, it was actually a great story that wasn't discontinued (sucks when you find an awesome story that was discontinued...doesn't it?)! D

I Loved This Short Story. It Was Really Sad, You Really Captured Their Pain Well. Especially Kakashi - His Chappie Was Sad 2 Read

Great Story!

Nah, I like nice!Jiraiya. As you can probably tell, I'm completely a Jiraiya fangirl, so anything making him nice and comforting is fine with me.

This was good. I liked Arashi-chan holding Rin in his arms, 'cause, you know, paternal!Yondaime is leik zomg so hott!1!1!1!2

Ah. Yeah. So you made Yondaime and Jiraiya awesome, the latter especially.

Meh likes. Meh likes.

aww...

so...will there be a Yondy side to this story? -tries vainly to keep eagerness out of voice and fails utterly-