amusing, and ridiculous.

I like how you showed off Wallace. He really is a human tank, and I find his stats in the game aren't quite as good as they should have been.

a seemingly very unlikely pairing, yet still pretty fun to read.

xD Okay... I'll need... I'll need some time to recover from that.

The Lucius Vaida I mean.

I never thought there could be a het Lucius paring that would choke me like that but... *out of air - makes a very weird face* wow.

The worst, I mean, the more... special thing ws athat, was that, they both were IC! xD

Both IC... and then absolutely crazilly impossibly Deu Ex Machinaly paired together on a certainly-not-platonic-level.

Mommy... ;_;

Anyway, congratulation, this was... very... interesting. Very well put. I guess. _

Honest, I know it was (it's jsut-) xD

hmm... beddy-bye time is coming.

anyway, this is the guy I know. and this one is TOTALLY it. lol

LATER!

Ah... once again, somebody not known to Tor. in other words, he sounds familiar, but WHO TEH HECK IS KAREL? and Mark, for that matter. the tactician, right? Wow, that guy really let himself go.

lol, LATER!

Hm... Altogether nice, but...

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something tells Tor-san that Tor-san would enjoy this more fully if Tor-san knew who Vaida was.

LATER!

Heh, SainxEveryone With Two X Chromosomes is hilarious. I rather like Nergal's journal entries, too. _ Hee.

I'm having a hard time imagining Karla and Vaida under the effects. I mean, Vaida is scary, and Karla is pretty stoic.

Mm... lovely angst in ch5. Though it doesn't appear to be following the FE6 storyline (IIRC, Pent and Louise's children are Klein and Clarine), but a realistic alternate reality in its own right. :)

Ch1 weirded me out for a bit. I've never really liked familial role-reversal, but when taken to the extreme... -cough-

Ch2... exactly how long did it take Florina to get out of her androphobic state, anyway? Plausible, but not probable. Still, it's crack, so... good last line, by the way.

Ch3... is... just... wrong. I got lost a couple of times along the way, since the boundary between fantasy, alternate-universe and canon is a little blurry here, especially in the last few paragraphs. Less actual romance than in the other chapters, but eh... even crack pairings get out of hand...

Ch4 appears somewhat of a fantasy scene instead of alternate-reality, since the whole idea of the medallion is a little improbable, but whatever works, I guess, and Nergal was a little OOC.

Ch5... some typos (somehow more visible here), and somehow less of a crack pairing than the rest- the sheer plausibility of the pairing and the angst makes it seem somewhat serious in comparison to the rest. Some tense slips in the

Yes, but also happiness and suffering do not always last forever, they come and go. That't what makes them so ambigious and powerful.

Needless to say, excellent work, I haven't read a Erk/Louise before so it was nice experience. Quite realistic, I might add as well. Don't worry about writing so much angst in your romance, I can't seem to write romance without some suffering, woe, or misfortune being cast down upon my victims.

Over all, it was wonderful, truly an enjoyable read.

hey there

like it! good old crack pairings.

i did find this chapter a bit hard to follow though.

but good job besides that

sarah xx

Wow. Just wow. Nuff said.

-chuckles- Oh, I had such mirth reading this, I enjoyed every single chapter. I liked all the pairings, full of variety and quite exotic I amy add. Seriously, there needs to be more pairings like those, couples like VaidaxLucius, FlorinaxWallace, and SerraxKarel kick arse. Hm, perhaps one day, when I get the chance, I'll give those couples a try. Nevertheless, aweseom story, I'm glad I stumbled across this wonderful piece of work.

Ah, don't worry about the late reply. I completely understand.

*giggles* I'm very glad I took your suggestion. This was quite hilarious, and I enjoyed every minute of it.

Your grammar was also much better in this story, although there were a few light mistakes, like:

/“Thank you much, love ya’ babe.” Sain yelled as sank back into his hammock./

It should be a comma, not a period, after the dialogue, like:

/“Thank you much, love ya’ babe,” Sain yelled as sank back into his hammock./

Nothing much, though, like I said. Great job, and I'd love to see more from you soon! :D

Hey there, IVIaedhros! First off, thanks muchly for the dedication! :D :D Anyways, I feel I should repay the favor you gave me for the latest chapter of Wayward Son (I made the corrections you pointed out, thanx muchly :D), so the lil' grammatical errors I could find...

"Sain spluttered as the of the raving man’s "

I think you're missing a word there :D;

"THE NEWLY MADE GOLD ACQUIRESS"

extra 's' :D;;

Anyways, that's all the critique I can give...I have little but praise for this chapter, it's HILARIOUS. XD XD XD I especially loved the unfortunate side effects of Nergal's little aphrodisiac. Ah, Legault XD XD XD Now, this is definitely a fic I'm happy is dedicated to one of my works. Many lulz were had! One question though, how'd you managed to work "ø ººø"? FFn hates asterisks (as I found out the hard way with Wayward Son ;_; ) but it apparently loves the little dots and Norweigan 'o's? :O!