You are so good at their characterization it's scary. Once again this is something I could see flawlessly fitting in with the series.

Oh, that was awesome. Your characterizations are extremely good. When Duo talks to himself it is believable, and you write conversations well. I haven't read a GW in a long time for a reason, but this was perfect.

nice one-shot. liked your heero characterization though his one speech about shame reminded me more of wufei. :)

Awesome rendition of Duo's capture/rescue!

And Heero was so cute!

Oh so good, and written very well.

Aw, I remember that begining part from that episode, tis my favorite episode. I actually went out years ago and bought the video with that episode on it! Lol, anyway, you did a very very good job. I was thorouly impressed and that doesn't happen often. Keep up the nice work.

Amazing. Amazing amazing amazing. I have only read ONE other fanfiction that got the boys characters down SO perfectly. Just wow.

The only criticism I can give is really just about your sentance fluency. You have the longest run on sentances Ive ever seen, lol. And its a bit too wordy (but in a good way). If you just worked with your punctuation a bit and some sentance structure and a little tweaking, it would be perfect. But thats just the Editor in me speaking, lol.

Im always open to Beta if you ever need it!

Yet again I have to reiterate how PERFECTLY done this story was. You have my utmost respect as a writer.

~Tempus Mori

This was absolutly stunning. A great insight into their friendship as it progressed in the series.

This is one of the nicest bits of Gundam Wing fiction I've seen in ... wow. Far too long. Wonderful interaction between these two!

If only studying Shakespear in high school had been half as enjoyable as you made this! I truly appreciated the literary excerpt, and your story was true to its theme. The way you brought out Duo's emotions really made this story come alive, and the imagery was fantastic. I especially love how insightful and non-stereotypical you made Heero.

(grins) Episode 19 is my absolute favorite of the entire series. You got pretty close to the actual dialogue. Excellent job, and this will be added to my C2 because of it. Yay!

I liked it. You should write more perharps.

I really really enjoyed reading this.

Mostly 'cause I can relate to what Duo is going through in this story. Mostly the dark thing... I'm sixteen, and I'm scared shitless of the dark... Phobia... *nod*

That, and I always have the feeling that I'm feeling too sorry for myself, and that one of my closer friends are going through something much worse. And she always has to tell me I'm being stupid and stuff...

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Yeah, whatever... Um k, babbling, I'll leave you alone...

AWSOME STORY THOUGH!

*faves*

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