Reviews for Shuriken
adelphe24 chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
heehee
Wanna Write 123 chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
Man I love little slices of life from the perspective of background characters and this one was top notch!
Vela513 chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
"I hate battling these guys. Weird crap always happens." Best. Line. Ever. I can see that being a bunny all on its own. Reading a few fics on here does make me wonder now, about the Foot. If they're a clan, then most of em ought to be related in someway. Are any of them as closely knit as the turtles? And what do they do when they're not chasing turtles around? I'll bet Donnie is pretty peeved at Mikey giving him candy in place of whatever he thought he was throwing. Good story!
Echo chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
LLOOOOLLL I wouldn't want to explain THAT to the Shredder! A gum ball? Mikey, if you want to take a snack with you to night patrol, TAKE YOUR OWN DAMN BAG! *lmao*

No seriously now, I thought this was well written, with all the ninja-ish calmness of the Foot-soldier and the typical Mikey-schrap... I really liked it. Gonna have to check if you got something similar... ;)
SmileyDJingles chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
ROTFLMAO! Oh, so funny!
Autumn Daughter chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
For some reason, I can't help but to think that Donnie MEANT to throw a shuriken, but he threw a chewing ball instead because "someone" (Mikey) apparently replaced/missplaced them.

Superfunny story, by the way Pure gold
Suit of Storms chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
I love this!
Ladyofthebookworms chapter 1 . 8/9/2007
*laughs* highly entertaining, and very interesting POV.
Sinisstar chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
LOL!

Too cute. XD
OSYH chapter 1 . 5/11/2007
I can never look at the Foot Ninja the same way ever again. But that's, of course, a good thing. Needless to say, I loved reading this (as I laugh silently because it's late at night and everyone else in the house is asleep).

Goongala!
Donnie-o chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
Ok, this one had me sniggering like crazy. Especially the line "How they have lasted so long against the mighty and honorable Foot Clan, I am sure I will never know." I just couldn't help but giggle!

Interesting perspective there, very original! I liked the sarcastic tone that the certain foot soldier had. Made me feel like he was rolling his eyes a lot.

Expecially after being attacked by a gumball! *sniggers again*

Oh, that Mike. Way way funny! Great job!
Donny's Boy chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
I agree entirely with Ramica-having this story from the Foot ninja's point of view was a brilliant choice, comedy-wise. I so admire your talent (among many) to write humor. It's been said that comedy is harder than drama, and I completely believe it. Thank you for the laughter, and thank you very much for this story.
Chibi Rose Angel chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
A gumball? Oh no wonder the others were mad at Mikey. Only HE would decide to put candies in Donnie's bag. I could so feel for that Foot Soldier though. Imagine his suprise when he finds out that for years, he's been getting his butt handed to him by creatures that are not only odd but also carry around candies... Oh yes a frustrating day for him indeed. Now I'm off to go and read some more of your works! _
Ramica chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
Oh my Pac, I'm ROFL. My sides are hurting. You certainly have done justice to that little bunny you adopted.

I loved the Foot Soldier's POV in this, the story, I believe was far more effective for it. What an error stay and check out the new dangerous weapons these freaks use.

I'm sure his Master was amused by that idea.

Brava, another great story.
CharlieCaller chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
Hehe! That was great! Seeing the turtles from another, outsider perspective was somehow refreshing to read. Love it!
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