I UBER LOVE IT! It Rocks! update soon!

I like the story, do you think you will continue it? I think you should! I coudl even help you with it if you're stuck or something...

-k.R.

YAY. plz update soon...haha lolz, poor naruto. *covers snicker*

This is really good. Update soon! _

Oh...

I'm excited! -jumps up and down-

Please update soon! Can't wait to see Itachi interrupting them! O_O -gasp- What will Sasuke do? Will there be hot smex? A possible threesome? -laughs-

Sorry! Just HAD to fire that out there.

Update soon please!

Ja ne!

DDB

Hm *Kuro Pauses to consiter as her finger taps her chin* alright I think I like it.

way to short and yes you should contiuw. its good you have something here. good base. keep it up and i will read more. bye oh

* jumps into bed with both. * "Naruto i'll open up and love you if he dasn't."

ok bye. *runs off*

I like where you're going with it, but the random Japanese thrown in seems out of place. Were I in your position I would just stick to english, its easier to follow and one doesn't have to scroll down the page to look for deffinitions and potentially spoil something for themselves.

Also, perhaps a little longer, it seemed rather vague otherwise.

I like it though, keep going!

~MistressKaia

I love sasuke and naruto together. please update soon!

GREAT STORY! i look forward to reading more! update soon!

I really like it I can't wait for the next chapter and to see what you borrowing off mine -Late

o...m...g... *bangs head on desk gagging* ItaSasu... *cries in horror*

PridE: *deadpans* she's a Uchihacest-a-phobe. Which is weir, since she likes ArashiNaruto... *shakes head*

me: *cough, still twitching* a-alright. Other than my extreme dislike for itasasu (*shudders*) i'd say it was pretty good-however, half way through you got bolded... i'm not sure if that was intentional or not... *shrugs* and what is the setting? If they aren't actually in Japan, or if Sasuke isn't japanese or something, you may want to steer away from all the Jap. words and phrases.

Update it please! It's perfect i love it!

Do NOT use Japanese phrases in a fanfic. Either stick to English or Japanese, because otherwise it is really annoying.

There's nothing wrong with using English words when there is a good enough translation.

It was realy good... I WANT CHOCOLATE CHIP