Cute story. Paper panes and spitwads, you forgot the rubber gloves filled with water!

I am recent to this web site. Miss Stargate Atlantis terribly. Loved your story, am giggling away here at work. People are looking at me so I better get back to work. Thank you.

Cute! Loved the by play!

haha this was eqic

LOL, I wonder how the whole spitwad thing turned out. :P I really enjoyed this one-shot, since I could actually see John telling Ronon about paper airplane target practice! . Like I said, I liked this fic and it made me laugh a lot, and I hope you decide to write more for this fandom!

love!

That was great! I stumbled a little over Beckett's accent, and I'm not much of a general/friendship story kind of girl, but overall, it was totally worth the read. Characterization was awesome. I could totally believe Sheppard starting something like that. Hands down, my favorite line - "You heard the man, McKay. Better run along now-Beckett wants to check out your ass." Could not stop laughing! Fantastic one-shot!

Cute! I love it!

That was freakin' hilarious!

wonderful! Don't we just love them being juvenile? Great work!

Greetings from Germany

I loved this naughty bored boys playing up and poor Carson having to try to control them, very funny.

That was hilarious! well done! really a great concept _

Awesome story! It's awesome! Very funny!

ROFLMAOOL!

I loved this- I absolutely howled with laughter as I read it. Awesome and so in character. Shep and Ronon can be so childish at times and so totally entertaining. They feed off eachother- big brother little brother. Awesome!