this was great but I was hoping it kept going and was hoping the sequel had been done

Great job

Great story.

Stories excellent so far is the shortest one I've read not counting one shots I like the little Harem he made with Ino Tauyua and kin and I hope you continue this story or at least the part to you plan to make I also hope that you add an extra two or three girls to the harem Temari and Karin would definitely make things interesting also add to reading I realize you make no reference to what happened to Naruto's mother .

Good start. We learn a few ways in which this Naruto differs from canon, while getting hints of how he influences his captors. Hopefully these mysteries will be resolved.

Why am I seeing a lot of fics calling minato 'arashi' and saying that naruto's last name is kazama? Is it some sort of manga thing? Or is it like from really early in the show?

Colour me surprised! I decided to read this to pass time and because it wasn't long, but at the end was shocked I'd actually enjoyed the story whilst I thought it be more like a 'Meh' story.

So is Naruto's father Arashi Kazama instead of Minato Namikaze? What's his mother's name then?

This was actually pretty well written. No offense by that statement, but I was pleasantly surprised by this fic. The spelling, grammar, and sentence structure were well done, with very few mistakes.

I liked how your Naruto turned out, especially near the end, his character really started to show. Loved Kin, Ino and Tayuya as well. Their relationship with each other was cute, and them sharing Naruto was also lovely.

That's all I can really say for now. Again this story was a pleasant surprise to read, and I thank you for writing.

Immortal not aging, invincible can't be killed

I like it

Love the story but.. You basically had Kin /cheat/ on Naruto with Ino. I mean Naruto asks about stuff like sharing, but Kin didn't even ask.. It seems like if she just saw someone she liked, she would fuck them too - Naruto be damned. I just think that since Naruto gives that courtesy than so should Kin. Besides that, I've liked it so far.

...Wow...just...wow.
You did wonderful, and I was surprisingly enjoying it. I am not supportive at all for Bi or any other preference in a romantical relationship. Preferences aside, this was a very ingenious plot you came up with. I have read over possibly 400 naruto stories, (I am on searchpage 237 at the moment) I have NEVER come across one like this. I dare say, you have came up with the only story plot that MANY have not come up with so far.
Ingenious!

according to flavor flav, he had sex at four.

ni.