Reviews for The Real Monsters
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2017
This is so amazing. It warms my heart to hear some sort of finishing touch to the ending.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/9/2012
Are you going to do a isabela and frank paring in this story I think you should because from what I've been reading it seems like it
BigDaddyD134 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Hey man your story was awesome. I loved it I really hope you finish the story soon, if I can make a suggestion you should find a way to make sure Carlito dies for good sometime in the story. Great story I hope you finish it soon man. Peace
Doom Marine 58 chapter 2 . 7/1/2011
First of all its takes more then one person to operate a tank, secondly Isabela is right calito is just as bad as those responsible for santa teresa.
talesofawesomia chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
otis didn't die. he and the survivors stole special forces helicopters and escaped.
Natureboy3 chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
Awesome! Just try to make the paragraphs a little smaller, it's easier to read. Please continue!
brad0vickers chapter 2 . 7/29/2009
i like this story alot so far hope its updated soon :D keep it up
cowardlycactus chapter 2 . 7/9/2009
Awesome so far, but if this is canceled, I'm going to start a riot. I mean, when finally I find a GOOD ending to Dead Rising, it gets canceled? That would suck. I know it's not like you announced it was canceled, but the amount of time it's been from the last update, I'm starting to worry. I really like the way this is going, just keep on trucking!
Peanut person chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
AH BIG WALL OF TEXT! That really makes my eyes bleed so i didnt read it sorry, try breaking it up more and dont make paragraphs giant!
BamStroker chapter 2 . 11/8/2008
Hey man... I'm rather liking your ending.. capcom should pick this up for the sequal.. and trust me.. i'm not just saying that.. I'd totally buy that shit..

Good to see a good sense of humor in a good story for once.. most people fail miserably..

But anyway man.. I've writting a story for dead rising on here myself.. its prototypical and all but.. hey.. if you'll read it and tell me what you think.. it'd help me out alot..

but yeah.. enough of me promoting myself..

I seriously can't wait for your continues...

Keep it up..

~Bam Stroker~
Samsonic1991 chapter 2 . 8/6/2008
damn this is god! its a better ending, I totally agree!
IX The Melodious Nocturne chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Yay! A real ending for Dead Rising! Now if only you worked for Capcom... Anywho thanks for making a REAL ending.

I found almost no problems with this story, but the two big blocks of text were hard on my eyes, other then that I loved it.
ARogueFox chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
I thought it was pretty good, you obviously put a lot of work into it
Moonshadow Dark chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
Loved it. Write more Please!
EvilProduct chapter 2 . 12/22/2007
Awesomeness man! I didn't like the ending of Dead Rising Either. Any more chapters?
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