The first time I read this, I was dismissive. I read the first few lines and skipped this story altogether. But I was certainly curious and my mind kept wondering what this story was about. After a few weeks of putting it off, I finally decided to read it. And I don't regret it. This is very well written and the story is plausible, just because the way you wrote it made it seem that way. I love the way to portrayed these characters and the overall story itself. You built them up perfectly and made me sympathize with them. I read some other reviews and some of them spoke of how sick this was, but I don't think it is. Or that, at least, you hadn't meant it to be.
The imagery is lovely and the emotion is fantastic. Thank you for writing this.

So many parts of this were just wrong...and I couldn't stop reading. Great job.

This story is so wrong it's not funny. But it's so well written and captivating that I can;t stop reading.

i spent the time to actually read all of this, and it is simply perfection 3 thank you so much for taking time to write this.

By the gods...your writing...the detail, the psyche of your characters... they're so human that they border on pure poetry.
I wish that I had the drive and talent you possess.

Absolutely fascinating! I love how their relationship progressed, from something so uneasy to something very companionable in the end. And I think it's perfectly true, how they can only be lovers to each other, because only they can match up to each other. They're such twisted little children, but they fill in the gaps for each other. Lovely, lovely story.

You know what I did? I searched through over 3,000 stories just to find this one. And you know what? It was so worth it. Brilliant, that's what this fic was, brilliant. I loved everything about this fic. KankGarTem is one of my favorite three way pairings.

why not ?

so well-written, very strong feelings, a good end. bravo !

Oh. My. Gawd.

That was my first reaction to this ABSOLUTELY amazing story. It was so deep and... I can't explain. Just: brilliant. Fucking brilliant.

This is f*cked up in a good way. Amazing proses. I love the morbid sensual aura this chapter exude.

Usually I dont review because alas, I'm lazy like that. But I was just so damned pissed you dont have more reviews than this. You weave such a great story and make them so real and yet true to their personality. I loved reading it.

-beams at you-

Temari beside him, her dress showing off all of her curves. She didn’t really have much, compared to Sakura or Ino, but she was still more than pretty enough for Naruto to sit up and take notice.

...So wrong there. Temari has WAY more curves than Ino or Sakura.

Twisted. Crazy. Interesting. Different. Therefor I like it.

this completely SANDS!

as in rocks, only..grainier

bahaha

Seriously.

The characterizations you've prescribed (reluctant but loving Kankuro, psychotic Temari, demonically powerful Gaara) are superb and fitting and damned perfect. I loved the entire fic - like when Kankuro tried to get out of the circlet, and all the times Temari went blood crazy (yeah, those parts were awesome).

So VERY well written. Loved it, completely loved it.

I love your fanfics. This one in particular was disturbingly beautiful. I am incredibly thankful that such talent does exist. I have yet to read one of your stories that I have not enjoyed.

Sincerely,

Jadelyn Nicole Black