This was beautifully written :D

Beautiful! I love this story so much, I can't even say. Great job, I enjoyed reading from beginning to end.

Great story. I loved their interactions and how Daniel slowly figured it out: the 'click' and first time he wanted to kiss Betty were just right. He knew he cared for her, probably not quite how much, but he'd need that. You wrote them true!

My only minor criticism would be that the flashbacks weren't differentiated in the text (by some sort of line break or italics). It meant that every time it happened, although to a lessening degree as I got used to it, I was disorientated and taken out of the story.

Oh my. I totally got that. It wasn't quick indeed. I loved your one-shot. Made me all happy for them, but sad for me. But man, this could actually happen in the series. I cannot believe how good you ended the fic. It was definitely great. Thank you for this. Such a nice read. (:

that was sowed together very nice!

That was the sweetest thing I've eve read...I loved it! :)

Angelica

Thank you so much for writing this. I really loved/enjoyed it a lot. :)

A very, very enjoyable one-shot. (And a very long one.) Great work!

added to favs & story alert

aminitna

i loved it. great job.

That was great writing!

Aww this is SO beautiful!

I love it )

aww that was so cute~! really well written!

-liz

Oh-My-Gosh.

You sure know how to keep someone on the edge of their seat! ]

At the end...

"RESULT!" - Me cheering on Daniel

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But Yes. Amazing work!

Oww, this was so sweet! I am a fan of Daniel and Betty together, well, especially because in the original "Betty la Fea" the "Daniel" in there (named Armando) was suppost to end up with Betty. I love this fic, the flashbacks and actual situation, and I could totally picture it in my head as like a perfect final episode, love it! very well written, I enjoy it so much. Congrats!

Really cute :-) can't wait for them to hook up on the show too.