I cant believe you killed heero! i cried like a baby! but great OC in Jason, and great character development all around.

A great story! I liked that it was unpredictable; that Wufei ended up with Jason instead of Heero! I love 1x5, but I'm also like unexpected endings sometimes! Overall, it was all very well done.

Heero & Wufei were supposed to have a happy ending... I'm stopping here, hope Jason falls into a manhole and dies a painful death...

I love this story. I remember reading it ages ago but I stopped when I realized it was unfinished because I hate reading things that may be abandoned. I'm really glad I came back and found it completed, I had really enjoyed what I read however many years ago it was.

I think you did a really good job with this, all the hardships seemed very real and in fact normal which doesn't happen often when writing Gundam pilots. I was kind of puzzled with Heero's role in this, not entirely but there were times when I questioned just what was going to happen and a lot of the possibilities I came up with didn't seem to fit. I found it a little disjointed at times and I think it was because while reading this I felt like I was watching two separate shows...genres even, the normal every day romance show and then Gundam Wing whenever Wufei would interact with Heero. Anyhow, when Heero did die I didn't feel like it was the right thing to happen and even the grieving period was a little...lacking.

It didn't make any sense to me until the ending. That's where it really fit and made this story cohesive and I couldn't think of a better way to close it off.

I know that might not exactly be what any author wants to hear, I want to end that with saying Jason was a wonderful OC and that is a rare thing for almost anyone to say when reading Fanfiction. You also made me cry and that is even more rare than a well written OC, not only that you did it on two separate occasions, congrats, I've never been happier to cry than over a well written moment.

Over the years it took to write you could see the improvement as it moved along. I greatly enjoyed this fic and flaws make things beautiful because perfection is boring.

Take care and sorry for leaving you with an essay~

I started reading the first chapter and realized that I'd alread read it. I then remembered that I hadn't reviewed it so am doing so now. LOVE! LOVELOVELOVELOVE! That is all.

Wow... That was an amazing story. I had to re-read it but it was a delight. Heero... I think my heart broke when Heero died. But Jason is a wonderful OC and I loved Duo throughout, his support of Wufei and his conversations were hilarious! But Wufei definitely steals the show. He's a marvelous character and I ADORE how you write him. True brilliance! Thank you for sharing!

Great story. To bad about Heero though. Can't wait for your next story.

Awesome ending ;) loved it

Love this story. Too bad Heero died but fitting for the story. I like your character Jason, glad he reduced his hours.

Hope you update this story soon.

STILL waiting for updates. I really didn't like Heero dieying, really made a mess out of me, crieying in front of my damn laptop, poor Wufei, hope you fix it, jajaja, either way I love this fic, please update soon.

i cried.

please, please, please update soon. I can't wait to know what happends next. Keep up the great writting.

but... heero. :(

i really like this story. plz update soon.

change your genre to tragedy or hurt/comfort. That way you wont fool anymore readers. That's all I ask. It may make people think twice about reading your story but it may also save you from having an upset reader.

Ok, now I'll review the other chapters.

I really like this story! I think you portray Wufei, well heck, all of the characters, really well. Your OC Jason is a really likable, well-rounded character, as well. Relations and interactions are just as complicated as real life, making the plot captivating and interesting to read.

Keep going! Can't wait for the next chapter. (Although I have a feeling it's going to make me cry again...)