It's been over 4 years and I'm still waiting. This story had such a promising start and the main idea really intrigues me... I really wish something could motivate you to continue... or at least write to lemon that's promised in the description _

Are you ever going to update if not is it okay if i continue the story for you

i honestly think you put to much in the end, his name, family and tribe, the capture, his mother, the retun to camp, all of it in one chapter, it's all pretty rushed. i think i might steal your idea of the whole society problem and the pregnant male thing, it's a good idea, i just think you went about it the wrong way. it's not meant to be a flame so don't be mad, i just get over critical when i hear a good plot coming and then the presentation isn't near what i had in mind.

I really like the idea. Its something different. I hope youre going to write the next parts. Im waiting :)

Very intersting! Write more and soon!

this was really good. Can't wait fot the next chapter

be happy please! I want to read the next chapter!

oh this is interesting! update soon please!

I really like this. It's deffinately original! Good luck on continuing! ill be keeping posted!

haha this fanfic is trippy as..!

sorry i didnt know how else to put it -_-"

please continue! i like it.