amazing story

"Wow" was what I said when I finished reading. This truly is an emotional one-shot but I cant help but love it. The depth in wich you go with writing your characters is inspiring. I almost cried halfway through the one-shot, and believe me, I dont have that often when reading fanfics.

I know this fic is more then a year old but I still want to say that you should keep writing in a first-person POV. But only if you find it appropriate for specific story's ofcourse.

Thank you for the wonderfull read and good luck on further writing,

Debje

ok i keep reading your stories and loving them, so off you go to the favorite authors list!

This was pure brilliance and excellently written.

Ah, I really liked it, the sadness, the farwell and the mud as well... would you please put a second chapter to it? I always wanted to know, what would happen if Kakashi would die... and what about the others?

be so kind and inform!

Ryu likes it! xD The pain, the debility, the realness. It's as though you know from first hand experience (or so I'd like to imagine). There is NO part in here that annoys me or 'didnt sound right'. Memories, apparitions, regret. These things sound close and within grasp and understanding. I guess you're gonna let us know what was his mission one day, right? Cause I hope so! xD

i liked it and would hope you put the second chapter up soon or i'll get angry and you wouldnt like me when i'm angry nah just kidding anger doesnt stay to long in me before it demolishes its pitiful but yes please put the next chappie up soon or else

That was extremely sad. I enjoyed it at the level where the emotions coming from this keep you hanging onto every word. Very, very good job.