4 years without an update? can you please finish this?

Just found this story and I really like the premise. The torture by the old woman adds an element I have never seen before. Very intriguing. I hope you continue the story.

Quote from AN: "I’ll let you guys ponder those questions while I work on the next chapter and I promise all will be revealed soon!"... so where am I to see all that has been revealed. Because I do not consider 2 years to be "soon".

Other than that, I liked it, a little difficult to read all the long paragraphs, but I have a feeling dialogue would build up as the story proceeded.

I saw that the date of your last update was long ago, but the premise of this story intrigued me, so I read, knowing I would be frustrated that you had stopped writing this. (I notice you haven't written anything - at least here on - for a really long time, and that's a shame.) However, I read the three chapters you have posted, and really like your story so far. So, I thought I would review, and hopefully spark your interest in finishing it. I'd like to see Bella find the Cullens and Edward, and of course, have them end up together. From what you have written so far, I think the journey would be great.

Anyway I enjoyed what you have written, and if you should ever decide to finish this, I am putting it on story alert, so I will know. I really hope you will come back to this story and finish. You were off to a really nice start. Thanks for listening. :)

You had me at the first paragraph. I really want to know if Jake will save her, or will Bella die in Laurent's cold uncaring arms. I love people that use spell check, or are just naturally awesome spellers. If a word is spelled wrong I notice it right away and it just, nags at me i guess. So thank you for doing that and/or just doing what you do best. (write) anyway, i am completely taken with this story, and am hungry for more.

I loved the story! But I wish you would have finished it. I really want to see what happens to Bella, if Victoria really is back, and if Bella ever finds the Cullens. Not to mention what will happen between Bella and Edward. I guess I'll just have to imagine what will happen. Oh well.

Keep Flying

Why'd you stop.

plese continue!

Luv, katy

OMG I LUV IT - PLEASE COME CHECK OUT MY NEW STORY! PLEASE!

Please post the next chapter son.

I really like this story! Why haven't you ever updated? It's good!

Why is this abanded?

update!

i know you said that her scent was no longer present in the town and that she has been gone for a couple months/maybe a year, but does charlie think she is dead? or that she ran away?

this is actually pretty deep. i havent read another "what if" story that pays as much attention to the details and "then this would happen"'s as this one. congrats and keep up the good work!

woah! intense! and really really good. i like your attention to details, your extensive vocab, and your original ideas. all of it makes you an amazing author!