very interesting plot, I'm actually a fan of negima and love hina myself so i would like to see more chapters if possible. anyways keep up the good work

I really like it, nice and dark ;)

this is real good so far, and its well written. I hope the next chapter comes out soon

Hmm...I think I remember reading the previous version and quickly losing interest, something like "eh...more of the same" after a couple of chapters.

This is pretty good though, I'm going to add it to my list. Keep it up, I want to see where you go with it.