You know, I’m reading this, and I gotta say, it is way way way way way waay waaaaayy WAAAAYYY too much detail. Like, I’m skipping past literal chapters just to get to the point. I could read the beginning and end sentence of each section and know what happened. Like, I don’t know what ur doing, but it’s really really too much stuff. And it’s all fluff. Don’t put as much whatever-you’re-putting, just get to the point! I can’t repeat it enough. Too much meaningless fluff! Makes your story too long and tedious and boring. Sorry if it sounded harsh, but it’s just how I felt reading this.

One of the best stories I have ever read. Thanks so much for writing.

omg Dean! what did you do?

Oh no Sammy! I love that Sam called for dean at the end of this chapter as the only one who could save him. Also dean holding and hugging Sam is so sweet. Thank you!

Ah so intense! Excellent chapter!

Ah I love hurt selfless Sam haha. This is totally entertaining by the way - really solid writing style :)

Awesome start!

A lovely piece, though I would have liked to see how Dean recovered in the aftermath of the creatures departure.

This is definitely one of my favorite fanfics of all time. Everyone was so in character and there was so much emotion in this! Amazing work!

I love this! It's well thought out, includes Bobby :) And the realisticness of the characters is awesome

Okay never mind, the writer explained about the pilot in the beginning of chapter three. I really enjoyed the story. It was masterfully arranged for underlying suspense and also had plenty of drama to make the story that much more interesting. *Spoilers: I especially loved the sixth chapter when Dean was trying to cheer Sam up when he has pretty much lost hope.* From a readers pov, I could really put myself in the place of both characters. Plus there is a little something for both Sam and Dean girls. Props, it's really good. ;)

Just a quick question from the first chapter... what happened to the pilot?

Bobby better learn to fly. This is getting serious.

There is something seriously wrong with Sam's back. If he doesn't knock off the Winchester tough guy act he's going to do himself some possibly permanent damage.

Wonderful, well detailed chapter. You conveyed the difficulties facing the men clearly. This level of detail can make all the difference in a story of this type. Skimping over the details takes away from the reality of the scene. Good work.