oh ulqui.. you're perfect for hime.. you cannot be dead! T_T

I think many people forget the violence and unmerciful terror that should be associated with Ulquiorra, prefering the fanfiction image of "emo" and "socially stunted cutie". You somehow kept all of them in character and I could actually picture this as being a scene in the manga. Beautifully written. Thank you.

This fic was absolutely brilliant! I don't think this is considered a drabble anymore! haha Still, the depth of the characters shown in this quick oneshot was articulately portrayed, great work!

wonderful piece! For something so short it really drew out a lot of depth.

You're a great writer. I hope you make a squeal or some kind of extension for this one.

Cheers

wow, the was actually pretty good *claps*

The intensity was really believable and the characters still remained true to their original personalities. Which is a hard thing to do for most fic writers.

I'm only a little sad that there wasn't more.

Keep writing

Cheers

Beautiful. For some reason, I found it painfully hot...and that kind of alarms me. xD

What I loved the most about this is that Ulquiorra fully acknowledges that Orihime trusts him. He tries again and again to make her sever that very trust, but has to resort to telling her to lie about it in order to preserve both the trust and her life. He also cares about those that won't spare her. That's some powerful stuff right there, and you did it perfectly in character.

Oh! Strangely enough, I found that cute! I mean, he beat the hell out of her, and she trusted him anyway. You should write more.

That was great. You kept them IC and everything! Nice work!

I liked it!

you're good at this...but, no offense, you're better at GrimmHime : )

This was amazing. Powerful and just SO well-done! I particularly loved the refrain in this ("do you trust me?"), and you could just tell how much it was hurting him, even if he didn't quite have the words. Brilliantly done!

Wow. This was just...wow.

Beautifully and amazingly written; I flinched at everytime he hit her...this was amazing.

Both characters are perfectly IC, and the story flowed really smoothly. You did a brilliant job with this.

Cheers,

Acey :)

It's pretty good. I like it. No mistakes whatsoever too. Keep it up and make more and more stories... although I think this one is a bit too mellow..

Oh wow. This was a difficult one to read, but one so memorable...! I can see that both Ulquiorra and Ori are totally in character, and it's still amazingly UlquiXHime. You really did a great job with this one! A definite fave.

Awesome. I really enjoyed it.