| Reviews for One Foot In Front of the Other |
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WhoSaysImEvil chapter 1 . 4/23/2011 The story is great except for this: Jim's eyes are green. |
WhoSaysImEvil chapter 1 . 4/23/2011 The story is great except for this: Jim's eyes are green. |
browneyednerd chapter 1 . 11/12/2007 aw! |
wellthatdepends chapter 1 . 6/18/2007 aw, very cute. Love the little feet-centric drabbles. Well written and cute, in a non-hinky way. Good job XD |
ehcanadian chapter 1 . 4/25/2007 Then she moves, her bare feet brushing against his calf, and he almost yelps. "Pam. Your feet are freezing." Definitely my favorite line of the entire story. And my favorite part. :) Great job! |
Rose13 chapter 1 . 4/2/2007 Very cute :D |
jilly74 chapter 1 . 3/31/2007 oh so precious...I love it! |
josephina chapter 1 . 3/30/2007 Aw, so sweet. I loved it ] |
standing-in-the-doorway chapter 1 . 3/29/2007 so sweet! i really liked #1 |
MonkeyPajamas chapter 1 . 3/28/2007 don't worry. jimpam... we all need help for how addicted we are. and i used to be able to stand on the very tips of my toes, but i was like in preschool. never did any dance. just had that ability. now i will just be happy i can walk on the inside sides of my feet. its weird and freakish and this was great. so, yeah. great |
Wendy Blue chapter 1 . 3/28/2007 This was just beyond cute! Great detail and descriptions; you have a lovely writing style. Well done! |
bredalot chapter 1 . 3/27/2007 That's really, really sweet. I'm such a sucker for the details (I think they make it so much more real), so I love how you showed the evolution of their relationship through the details of Pam's feet. Just one question: is the third part supposed to be the morning after the second part? Because that would make sense. Anyway, lovely. Nice job, really. :D |
Sarah Ellens chapter 1 . 3/27/2007 So good! Really original and well-written and perfectly in character. Aww, I love Jam! |
FictionInReality chapter 1 . 3/27/2007 Fabulous. I love, love, love it. And don't get discouraged by a lack of reviews. I've posted stuff here before and Office fanfic tends to get less reviews than other fandoms. No worries. :) |
SmilingInnocently chapter 1 . 3/27/2007 This is without a doubt one of the cutest stories I have ever read. Please write another story soon, I can't wait to see what else you come up with! |