Reviews for First Task
stevem1 chapter 1 . 7/3
Pretty good.
Whimsy's Mayhem chapter 1 . 11/3/2019
Incredible. Just...incredible. Words aren’t enough to properly express the amazing beauty and enthralling majesty you have created in this small fic. This, THIS, is a perfect example of why I prefer fanfics to published works. In just a few hundred words, if that, you have created another universe that promises adventures untold and incredible world-building, that hints at forgotten truths and astounding secrets. This reads like the beginning of an epic series that would capture the minds and dreams of readers for decades to come, not a one minding an encyclopedic-length adventure.

A series that we still know is not to be, purely for the fact that it is written here, in a fan fiction site, over ten years ago, with no further additions and that last, damning line.

*Finite Incatatem*
trista.sterling chapter 1 . 10/27/2019
This is such an intriguing idea. Wow.
taxzombie chapter 1 . 12/10/2018
An excellent tale. Nicely done!
God1643 chapter 1 . 9/21/2018
Nice.
lechatabbicat chapter 1 . 8/22/2018
Love hearing the perspective of the dragon! Well done!
IronHair chapter 1 . 3/29/2018
Woah. Dragons giving up power like that speaks of wisdom and strength the human race develops in real life. Very well written.
kimjo2 chapter 1 . 9/23/2017
Awesome in the true sense of the word. Thanks so much
James Evans chapter 1 . 3/17/2017
Awesome yo
digbygreen chapter 1 . 11/22/2016
Here, there be Dragons!
rnthenu chapter 1 . 6/2/2016
That was amusing.
blinkingharder chapter 1 . 11/27/2015
Loved the ending
kase519 chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
Beautiful
moonprincess97524 chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
interesting.
ert54 chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
woowwww
i soooo love this story. its amazing. I've got no idea how you come up with this stuff
inspirational!
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