Very nice.

Great one shot! Loved it! keep it up! My one issue is the fact that the uniform came from bridger! Thats incorrect, in the series Bridger didn't even know he had signed up until months later and he was DEFINATELY not happy about it! Good story anyways!

Excellent characterisation and very skilled, precise writing - not a wasted word. Well worth reading and re-reading.

short but good. you know Lucas better than the Seaquest writers did.

I don't honestly know how to say that I like this story... it's complicated. The thoughts are organized just like I'd expect Lucas's to be, and the characterization is really good. It took me a while to find this story, but it was well worth the time spent. I really enjoyed it.

Oh, my whittle Katawyn is growing up so fast! Already she has her very own published story _. I love it, as usual. You have never been able to disappoint me with your stories. Keep up the incredible work and make sure to publish a few more, ok?

P.S. Come review mine when they get up, pretty please, with sugar and cherries and Lucas on top? _~

I really liked it! It's interesting to see how Lucas feels after Bridger leaves... it's kinda sad and you really brought that out in your story. Wouldn't you like to be the one to console that boy at night? ;)