this is really good, looks like Bo's got one tuff chich on his hands!

nazy

Sorry, Care, but you missed a line.

"Ooh, I'm shaking in my boots, Barbie."

lol, I'm kidding. I like it! Although there are a few times where I had a hard time understanding what was happening. It wasn't clear who was doing what. Use names! ;)

Update soon. Even if no one else wants to hear it, I do!

great start i may be wrong but i smell trouble.