Okay, finally Ive read this story (And finally Im trying to write an english review again! Ha!) and first of all: It is very good. (Or however you say that)

Eventhough Jeeba is pretty and loved by everyone, I never had the feeling, that she was a Mary Sue and .. yeah, I like that XD Its hard for me, to accept OwnCharacters (Yeah... I know, bad habbit *drop*), but Jeeba makes it easy, to like her (But she still dumped my favourite character!).

I love your style of writing. Your descriptions are easy to understand and enough to make the setting clear to everyone.

Normally Im all into describing writing styles and correct grammar and such, but ... right now all I can say is, that Ive enjoyed most of the story. Wah, reviewing in english is just too difficult! I can read an english text with my trusty little dictonairy at hand, but writing something is far more difficult...

Anyways, I liked the content of your story as well (...Habe ich das schon mal erwähnt?), but I think, somethimes Reuben looked a little too weak. I mean, he has all the powers of Stitch and Jumba never had a chance against 626 (But maybe this is just me, trying to defend my favourite chara XDD). Otherwise everyone was behaving just like his original character. I love it XD

I think, Im going to read the sequel tomorrow... But I doubt, Ill write another review... Im used to write in german, so I hope, I didnt fail completely right now.

lg Tikaa

I just read this whole story, and I must say you are a talented writer! I hope I see more stuff from you soon!

Aw, so cute!

I love this story. Ruby and Keltzan sound so cute

Wow. The fight scene really suprised me - I never thought Jumba and Reuben would fight each other like that, but it was very good. _

I like the wedding. I picyuted Stitch i a top hat. So cute.

Keep up the good work...

It so ends a with a great chapter to a great story. Good Job!

That was a great ending!

Good angst!

This was pretty good. I would like to read more.

noval idea, and the novalty isn't the only thing good, its well writen and interesting. what did 625 have?

P.S. don't worry, your not getting a lot of reviews because people are afrade of new ideas

This story's really good! Keep going.