This is absolutely beautiful :) I loved the conversation between the two Doctors. To anybody passing by, it would have made little or no sense. But because they are the one and same, they knew exactly what each other were going to say.

And the "I hope not -" that was just so sad yet beautiful at the same time...

Loved it!

this makes me sad but i love it

Awww that was so sad but a lovely little piece.

This was so gorgeous. When the Ninth says "I hope not-" - I swear my heart broke a little. So beautiful, so sad.

I love it! Very good! Poor Doctor! I love the ending! Awesomeness!

How poignant and heart-wrenching, as we know the pain of which the 10th doctor speaks. How I wish it could have been forever.

I think that's the second or third time I have read this story, and I'm still about to cry, again. I love it - the angst, everything, caught so perfectly in such a short piece. I really, really liked the 9th Doctor, and I love how you've capture the agony of his not being able to change time.

Oh, that was wonderful! :)

All the best,

-LM

I love this! It's so heartbreaking for Ten to sit there and watch Rose from afar knowing what will happen. I love the ending where he held her and told her she would be with him forever! Awesome story!

That was good, thank you :-)

aw that's heart breaking that is!

I really liked it. especially since I love both Doctors. Nice job!

GAH! That's just so heart breakingly sad! I absolutely love it. I loved the part where Rose and Ten's eyes meet for just a second and the Ten decides he has to go NOW. great job

*sob* No seriously, that was beautiful. I love how you reversed their rolls at the end with the "forever" line.

Beautifully poignant. You really nailed the emotions and characterization, excellent work. :)