I found this looking for some KabuSaku. Even though it is not new, thought I would give it a shot.

You're first? Enjoyed it immensely! Thought the intentional vagueness of the "act" between Kabuto and Sakura was perfect. Sometimes less is more. There was enough detail to know what was going on. You allowed the reader to fill in the blanks with their own imagination, which I liked. Kabuto seemed to enjoy the encounter. This makes me want to read more KabuSaku.

As for the ending? I thought it was perfect. To me it sounds like, whatever deal Sakura made with Kabuto resulted in bringing Sasuke back with her to Konoha. The idea of Sakura sacrificing for Sasuke is definitely in character. Though it appears she misses Kabuto? Interesting. Would Kabuto ever agree to such a deal? I don't know. Right now I don't have a good handle on what motivates Kabuto anyway.

For me to be able to interpret so much from such a short piece says a lot of good about your writing ability. I don't think you need to change this at all. Do you plan on writing more KabuSaku?

If u ever think of making a full story...do so! very nice ...

I applaud you on your first official fic! Nice job!

Mmkay, to the constructive criticism!

Very interesting. And quite well written. Good job! *gives cookies*

awesomeness!

You must continue this (though you don't have to, I'm just strongly suggesting that you do).

wow... wait, i think i read this before! not that im saying you copied! its just i didnt review. sorry, i know that sucks... good story though!

That... was amazing D:

There's not enough of this pairing..

this is my fave pairing. i lurved it!

I really like your writing style, more KabxSak please!

_ Very good!