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Wow, the descriptions in this are simply beautiful. Love the comparisons between Ziva and Kate, and how much Tony still misses her. This is probably one of the best post-Twilight pieces of fanfiction I've read so far. Nicely done.

Cheers,

Jimelda

Wow. Oh my god. This is so good. Really, it kept me interested and it made me tear up a little bit and oh. So so so good. I found your Psych fanfic through a rec yesterday, and now I'm just going to be reading everything, I think. I'll be reviewing most of this today, I think, all of this so far is lovely.

Love this, really sad but really good!

This was a very beautiful and touching piece. I really like how effortlessly it all flowed together. You got the emotions down perfectly and I wish that this had been on the show. I love the comparisons of the cross and the star of David necklaces. And their reactions when Tony mentions Kate. I also really liked the comparisons between the first and second times they go on stakeout. Wonderful job.

Very beautiful. I like to think it was like this, even though the audience didn't get to see it.

A great story. Very good.

Oh, wow, this was breathtaking. What a gorgeous story.

I LOVE this! It is so nice to read a fic that really seems to get the characters perfectly.

sad.. i like the feeling of this fic

What a gorgeous idea for a story. It's so easy to compartmentalize Kate as part of the past and Ziva as part of the present that I never think about comparing the two. I love the sections that are just two sentences long, one for each of them, to break up the more narrative and in-depth passages. Especially the cross vs. Star of David necklaces. I also really like the line "Ziva gets tight-lipped every time and McGee gets quiet and sullen and Gibbs acts like he doesn't even notice and Tony wonders what the hell's the matter with them." I can just picture it. Overal, one of the best fics I've seen in a while.

Very good.

The first good NCIS fanfic I've read! I love the pattern you use.

i like this, even though i am a firm tiva fan, it has a grieving process to it that seems realistic but i do believe he would eventually come to accept ziva and respect her.

thanks, great writing.

from thewomanwhosoldtheworld

Wow that was really great. It all flows so seamlessly. It's an impressive piece of writing.