This was beautiful. I love the last line:)

I really liked this. :) It was well written and the ending was very clever. Loved it.

Awesome story! Very sad!

I loved the line at the end. :)

This was fantastic. As the Doctor put it, "a wonderful, beautiful, terrible" story :)

It may be a bit late of me to leave a review, but I wanted to say that this story is absolutely.. fantastic! Really, it's amazing. Poor tortured Doctor!

*sob* so sad...wonderfully done, though. Love the dawning sense of realisation you get, and the end line is just heartbreaking.

Very nice. So sad, though...

good story, i like it

Oh, poor Doctor! Clever idea, and very well put together. I didn't guess at all until Jackie disappeared what was going on.

I'm not saying I've read every post-Doomsday fic out there, but this did seem very original to me, too, so congratulations for a new take on a situation which everyone in the fandom has written to death! :D

Very well written. I liked your use of emotion, by the end of the story I wanted to give the Doctor a hug. He sure could use it.