I really should have reviewed this long ago, it's been in my favourites for years. This is a brilliant piece of writing, everything is in character, the pacing is brilliant, and it's funny. The only problem I have with it is the idea that two teenagers in a physical relationship for one or two months haven't even thought about sex. I don't buy it. I'm not saying that they would act on it, in fact their decisions in this fic are responsible ones, but their hormones would not let them get away without thinking of it.

On the other hand the rest of it is awesome. Particularly Ron's great moments: The emergence of his true "serious face" and the conversation between Conscience, Love and Logic. (I always picture them as Ron, Kim and Wade respectively.)

Thanks for an awesome fic!

That was great! Everything felt in-character, it was nice. I like the innocence you had here, where they're out to protect each other, and how they defy the social standard. As another reviewer said, it's a great message.

Aw it's over...well hopefully there'll be more stories like this when you come back...it says on your profile "UNT RETURNS" Coming soon., hopefully you'll be able to produce more quality fics soon.

Also I gotta say that this chapter is so cool., I find it a bit lacking but it's still cool...I especially loved the part when Love,Conscience, and Logic got together! That was so funny! That was ingenious I tell you!

Looking formward to your comeback!

Man!

I like Kim and Ron's being innocent, just as the way you portray them here. It really is very nice to have a show of moral discipline and defiance upon what is condered normal yet wrong in society...it's a strong message!

Wohoho! Intersting this story seems very interesting.

Fantastic story. I certainly loved it. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work! _

are there going to be more chapters to follow this one or a squeal to this story?

After reading all 3 chapters straight through... I have to admit that this is a very refreshing and nice story. Why do I say that? Because even though Kim is the classic aggressor (and understandably because of Bonnie) it was really nice to see that they didn't have to do what everyone expected (heh, if that was the case we wouldn't have a world-saving cheerleader would we?) and instead chose to do the right thing and take it one step at a time. I love it overall and hope you'll write another like this. Maybe you could do a Bonnie and Brick story? *thinks about it* Nah! :)

Oh, and in defense to Ron's "Logic" guy... hang in there, your time will come. :) One day you won't be the distraction.

As for tweebs, I think they should count their lucky stars that it wasn't their MOTHER who'd found them. LOL! Who knows what she would have done if she'd seen them like that! Though I am reasonably sure that this is one thing that their father won't be telling his wife about... ever!

Now I as a fellow fanfic writer of KP, I have gotten a few people to say "Read this author's story..." and so on but it was one reviewer that told me about *this* story in particular that got me super curious because they had compared a chapter in my "Car Alarm Surprise" story to the part where you had Jim and Tim 'exploring' that female side. Lol!

However after reading this story... I think the reviewer was just being funny because you see in my chapter. Jim and Tim really DID get turned into girls (by accident due to Drakken of course) and that the reviewer expected me to have them in a LBD of their own at some point. LOL! If you're curious about the chapter in question. It is "Chapter 41: She-Tweeb!" Just don't complain about what I do to Shego ok? :)

Well, again keep up the good work and as a certain comic book guy likes to say... "Excelsior!" :)

Hi!

I was adviced by Molloy to check out your work, and I'm glad he did! I really liked this story...the scene with Love, Logic and Concious was fantastic! I can't wait to read the rest of your work.

Very convincing scene of Kim nearly losing more than her bearings thanks to Bonnie. Ron comes through. Hilarious use of war movie imagery connected to the army of hormones.

Glad to see they'll do things (including it) at their own time and on their own terms. Sweet ending.

And the credit sequence? Absolutely perfect.

Very good depiction of a teen party. Great dialog among the girls and guys. Just the questions that would be asked. And you have me burning with curiosity over what's on Kim's mind.

There's a reason the black dress made it in the footage of the opening in Season 4. And now it's upgraded...

Good opening. Like the thought processes going on, and I hesitate to think about what changes Monique has wrought. My guess is MrDrP did NOT see this little black dress.

Bahahaha, loved the bonus scene! Great job; it was really sweet! (:

Angelica

Another great fic. I especially luved the part with Conscience, Love, and Logic(Well he never really listens to you so, we need you to be the distraction...Great, always the distraction). Keep up the fab work. O.A.O. :)

Lovely ending. Aside from some comma problems and misspelling "raggedy", this was a really good story. Very romantic.