Oh, nice. "Youthful Passion", nice phrase. Keep writing!

Cliche or not, this was excellent. Keep up the good work.

Hmm...I like your writing style. There were a few spelling and grammatical errors, but that is okay.

Personally, I think it is too short though. Perhaps I have the "Dragonball Syndrom"...I think some things should be stretched out and put in great detail. The story is very sweet though. :) I look forward to seeing more of your written work.

Much Love,

Abby

I love it! It is so sweet! Lee and Sakura are my all-time favorite Naruto couples EVER! That story was so cute! Write more!

I could smack myself in the head for not reading this on Valentine's Day. Now I'm wondering what I was doing that day. Anyway, that was just lovely! There were a few spelling errors, but it is easily fixed. Aside from that you did a wonderful job for your first shot! It's great to have another author contribute to this pairing!

XD Aww, but it was because of the cliche it was so adorable! Perfectly wonderful for a first SakuLee. Great job!

Aw, that was really cute and really well written. Truly, I liked it. And I love this pairing by the way. "grin" I'm glad Sakura finally realized her feelings for Lee and I like how you described everything, although I'm still not very sure off the way Sakura fell down. Heh. But it really was cute, and it's not at all cliché. In other stories, Sakura would go: I love you and Lee, after a few seconds of surprise would say: I love you too, but in your story, Sakura first explains everything and apoligizes before Lee is even able to say or do anything.

Just to say, this is a wonderful ficcie, very good. Short but beautiful. So, do keep it up, you have a real talent here.

Aw! That's cute! Write more of these, because that was just so sweet! I'm going to go reread this now... Again, cute!

I love this pairing your not stupid at all. Seriously great valentines day oneshot, and you wrote it very well. You had a good amount of description and the dialoge was perfect. I know i'm not offering any GOOD criticism which will help you improve, but i don't think you need to improve i loved it :)

~CrashAKAValerie

That was cute, Jess. I saw a fewspelling errors, but I know you don't have spellcheck so I can forgive you. XD

Nice work _