I like how that was written, nicely done.

I like how Casey listed all of Derek's changed behaviors which kind of represent the fact that she plays very close attention to Derek. I like what happened in the end a lot.

Lizzie and Edwin are always amusing when betting and I'm glad they don't want to argue like Casey and Derek.

WOW! That was a Great one-shot!

~Crystal

aw i think u should write a sequel!)

loved it update soon

Great job! I really, really, loved it!

I liked it.

-Lani

Ah, another amazing story. :):) You're a very writer. I really liked this one. I loved how he approached her and the thing about how things are better left unsaid. Great story. :):)

~Jordyn~

great story! i just recently discovered your dasey stories and found them quite to my liking :) hopefully you'll write many, many more- cause they're really good

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That was awesome!

But I wish it wasn't a oneshot, it would make a grat chapter story.

Wonderful job.

I liked that one as well. Good job. Cheers.

wow that was like totally awesome! I loved it! yay! lol well, i'm definately adding this story to my favourite story list. yah totally lol. Well, keep up the AWESOME work, and review ya later!

Hey, who knew you were such a good writer? Both stories make me want to read more, so you have to keep writing.

~Lindsey~

Very nice.

I really enjoyed this. I thought you everyone's charaterization perfect.

excellent work. I'll look forward to more LwD stuff from you in the future.

wow, that was amazing Jimmy. you know, i never really pegged you for the creative writing type [which is kind of bad to be judgemental like that i guess] but you have a great way with words, and know just the right ones to use to express the mood of the situtation; i love when writers are good at painting the perfect picture for the story. i was just about to copy and paste an example of what im talking about, but then i realized id be highlighting almost all of it.

well, re-reading all this to collect my thoughts to write more, i realize that it all looks like im just trying to flatter you with compliments of your writing that might not even be true, but dont worry, they deffinately are. i totally look forward to reading more of your writing :]

-Courtnay

it was awsome