| Reviews for First Comes Love |
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   Sooty85 chapter 2 . 12/19/2019 12 years late to this fandom but I’ll review anyway. I loved it, the first chapter was so romantic, loving and sexy (must have been cold though - River should have taken a blanket or two from Serenity with her !) The second chapter was really funny, but I loved that they had a daughter, stroppy or not ;D. I wonder if she was conceived that night ? and what other children did they have ? I’m greedy, I always want more ;) |
| FicWormKate chapter 1 . 1/23/2018 I loved this! |
| Wicked.Onna chapter 2 . 3/29/2017 so cute and sweet |
| thetreasure11 chapter 1 . 7/16/2011 The mistletoe was a strech to believe, but I liked the similarities between the deer couple and Rayne. ) |
| JustLikeToRead chapter 2 . 3/23/2011 Great story! :) |
| Sunshineali chapter 1 . 12/27/2008 This was one of the first Rayne fics I ever read and is on my Top ten list. It is PERFECT in every way. I wish you write more. So romantic, so subtle and sweet. Love it, love it, love it. |
| Eliche chapter 2 . 6/30/2007 Great story, and great epilogue very nice. :D |
| JayneDancing chapter 1 . 4/11/2007 I love this, it's all very Jayne and River while still being sweet. And the eplilogue. *Hoots*, poor Jayne, getting blamed. Loved it all. |
| Missy Jade chapter 1 . 3/7/2007 Hot damn, that's going on my fave list! Hee, so good! |
| EreshkigalGirl chapter 2 . 2/19/2007 Hahahahahahhaha! ROFL! That's too cute. I love this! I'm favorite-ing. |
| EreshkigalGirl chapter 1 . 2/19/2007 How did I miss this? |
| OriginalBubble chapter 2 . 2/19/2007 I like it! |
| wyntertwilight chapter 2 . 2/16/2007 Lmao, the epilogue is just brilliant, SO ADORABLE! But focusing on the actual story, it's pretty gorgeous itself :-) I really liked some of the imagery you used and that parallel you did with the deer was pretty clever ;-) Your River and Jayne voices are true to the real characters too, for some reason "Not near as attractive, but…" really appealed to me because it's so Jayne. The whole thing is near-enough perfect though, loved it! |
| DestinyManifested chapter 2 . 2/16/2007 Ha, cute! |
| FabledFigment chapter 1 . 2/12/2007 I like your short pieces. Nicely done. |
