Reviews for A Foregone Conclusion
Sage of Wind Dragons chapter 1 . 3/25/2018
NICE that is amusing cause the parents have a freak out but the step more calm to it and AMUSED... well.
HELENz chapter 1 . 4/3/2016
:)
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
Oh i liked that idea a lot and I think you pulled it off quite nicely.

I like that you kept the daughter's father a secret until the end and I like how you had Derek's confidence throughout the whole meeting.

Well done!
EreshkigalGirl chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
Super aw! (Really, the Aw has a cape and everything. Your fic is the telephone booth to turn a regular Aw into SuperAw! Go you!)
internalscars chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Wow, that was a great fic! The "he"s weren't confusing at all, and it did make it interesting. Oh, and FINALLY I remember what the dad's name is! xD
Catastrophic.Composer chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
i totally got this one and i loved it even more than the first one (; ahdroable
LF7 chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
Aww, how cute. I loved it! Adding to favorites
princetongirl chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
loved it update soon
Vampiresforlife chapter 1 . 2/14/2007
It was amazing. I loved it. I had kind of have been passing it over,then i recognized the penname,gave it a shot. It was really god.
Oasis Blackmore chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
Like it, definitely. It was a really great continuation thing; I loved Derek's cocky demeanor, hiding his uncertainty.

It has been ages since you posted anything, though I have to agree that school is a creativity-sucker. *sigh* Regardless, keep up the good work.

~ Oasis
JanetBanana chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
I just read the other fic first, and I really enjoyed it. I really enjoyed this one too. The POV of Dennis is almost that of any Dasey fan, in that they see it from the outside. I enjoyed that. Hmm. Keep writing! Because thats really good.

Derek nodded understandingly. “You’ve got nothing to worry about,” he promised, then reconsidered. “Pissing her off doesn’t count, right? Cause there’s no avoiding that,” he added. His expression said he rather liked it too much to avoid it anyway.

I laughed out loud at that line. It's so perfect.

Keep it up!
jannikajade chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
So i doubt this will suprise you, but i LOVED it.

I thought Derek was very, very IC. I loved Dennis's thoughts on Derek, and how he's known all along.

Favorite line: "Then, because of the protective look in the other man’s eyes, he added, “You know I’ll take care of her,” in a tone, while completely lacking in any sort of mushiness, that said it should have been a given."

I melted a little.

Too cute. Really. Nice work.
CheerfullyPessimistic chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
good oneshot. though i forgot "guess who's coming to conclusions" and still read this anyway.

the "hurt her, hurt you" talk is very common, and yes, i have seen these kinds of things in other sections but not in this one.

good job. the way u write so beautifully at 3 in the morning never ceases to amaze me.

~CheerfullyPessimistic
funnechick chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
I liked it, and I loved that Derek actually asked him and knew Casey so well that she wouldn't have it any other way. good job!
Chica De Los Ojos Cafe chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
O! Very interesting! I like how this came out! So wait...you haven't done a proposal fic yet? So are you gonna make one where Derek proposes to Casey, and mentions how he already got her father's approval? I would surely read it! Just consider!

~Chica~