I have never read a POV to Jack's final thoughts at the end of Lost City, and you did it really well. It was typical Jack O'Neill. Brilliant.

I hope you don't mind all of my reviews. I just feel that i have something to learn. D While reading, i've learned not only about how i write, but about what the characters were likely thinking too, and I love the way you do it. I am truly impressed.

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Nice fic for a fav ep of mine!

Wow, powerful interpretation of what Jack may have been feeling during those last moments, near death experience. Wonderfully written.

WOW! Powerful writing! Really interesting, seeing it from Jack's POV. But it just screams out for a sequel ... him waking up and remembering... :o)

Perfect Jack-voice. Beautiful. Thanks.

That's brilliant,thanks for sharing.

wow- great to have the story from Jack's perspective! nice job!

Awesome. Powerful imagery, and perfect voice. Great read.