this is good you should make more

Hmm this is an intresting fic

I can't wait to read more!

good story. keep it up!

I like the story so far, but, dear god the pacing makes my head spin. Your character interactions are good, but they'd be better if you took a bit more time to explore them.

Aside from that, keep it up.

any more detail on the relationship?

i like all the military stuff but i want more info on their relationship..

good job though...

heh. my teacher was a Vietnam vet, so I can sorta read army-talk. But this is really good! keep it up!

Nice job so far. Keep up the good work.

Best,

~JohnnyG

Wow, totally doesn't seem like two years but I could get why it would take that long if they're fighting in trenches-guess this is gonna start taking it's toll on troop levels and moral.

Nice. Can't wait to see what happens. I'd like to see their lives on leave before they jump into the fray to pull Tanuki's ass out of the fire. Of course, I'm just making assumtions but I like to do that so nyah.

The narrative flow of this story is kind of chaotic and fast. Normally I'd tlel you to slow down and really show us what's going on, but somehow it seems to work for this story to keep things chaotic like this - it reflects the very nature of war.

Wow, what can I say? Your story is amazingly detailed and well written. I love NarutoxHanabi Pairings and your use of military terms heightens up the action quite a bit. Probally some of the best fight scenes I've ever read. Keep it up!

I think it's a good length. When it's too long, it just kills your desire to clean it up.

Nice use of environment in your action scenes.

Good. She will be there to help him cope with losing people when he starts losing some. Same as he will for her.

Glad you updated so promptly :)

I wish it was longer though.

I just want to drop a characterization tip off.

Naruto would not tolerate being codenamed 'Kistune' especially if it's the Hokage that's giving his codenames.

Tsunade wouldnt' be that heartless. As to refer to him like everyone else, a demon.

~A Rushed Review By Me