I have to say, I am soooooo happy I stumbled upon this fic and gave it a chance. It has been one of the best decisions I have made in awhile. And! It’s kept me sane during quarantine, that’s for sure. Not only do I love the medieval theme to it, this entire idea was brought to life so beautifully! With my favorite couples no less. Bless.

Trunks and Pan make me feeeeel things, okay? I’m such a sucker for trupan; you haveeeee noooo idea. The slow burn trope was used wonderfully in this and trunks character development was one sent by the GODS. Truly, their devotion to each other and all the ways you challenged their relationship, they over came realistically and whole heartedly. OBSESSED DAMNIT OBSESSED.

Bra, Goten(god we Stan Goten), Uub, and Marron are so wonderful and their interactions are all so natural. Seriously, you captured their relationships so well! The scene in chapter 33, where they all played truth or dare was so wonderful! I laughed so hard at pan being hit on by probably gets more girls then Goten and trunks COMBINED. And that’s FACTS ok, I don’t make the rules.

Sigh, I love this fanfiction so much.

I do want more of Goku though. I’m also interested in his relationship with Bulma and Chi-Chi. Let’s face it, he has both woman to look after now! LOL. (Lucky man)

I know it’s been a long time since you’ve updated and 34 chapters later, Im still managing to want more. What a giant fic! You are an amazing writer and I hope one day this book will be published too! Thank you for making this fic, it restored my love for trupan x10; that’s for sure!

Oh seriously you write beautifully I want you to update as soon as possible because if it is left incomplete then i will never happen to know what happened afterwards will pan have a baby or again something evil will happen and surely your plot is awesome. You are like writer from fanfic heaven. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese update more chapters. I heartily request.*~* ; )

The summary doesn't match the story at all. I can't be the only one that thought Trunks was a transgender, right?

i like ur story... will u update soon plz

can u please update the rest of the chapters or tell me where i can read them.. gosh! seriously! the story's superb... its awesome n i love it! please just dont leave the fanfiction incomplete atleast for readers like us... i hate it when i read a worthy story n it is incomplete without any updates... please just update ... its ur stor superb writer ... pinky please update soon!

Ohhh please complete your beautiful story...its just to amazing...brilliant imagination seriously and beautiful relationship they all have...and yeah finally vegeta admitted that he love bulma so please bring them back together...and there is more to come m sure of it please update m sure your readers are dying to read your story...do not abondone this fic please

Oh my God I really really hope you'll see this, I know it's been 5 years since your last update but I can't help but hope you'll come backand finish this story one day (i mean you did come back after five years once! haha). This story is absolutely beyond amazing, everything, from the plot, to the setting, to the characters etc. has me completely hooked. It's so sad that you never got around to finishing it (yet). Yu have an incredible talent and i know you started this story 15 years ago and must probably be sick of it but honestly if you see this, I am BEGGING you on my knees to try and write some more. I would be so incredibly grateful :')

Please finish! At least let everyone including Vegeta be brought back to life. It would be sad to have them separated forever:'(

Complete this beautiful story! Please please

keep up the good work, as i would like to read more of your stories. please dont let me wait so long for your next chapter. i know you are Pan and Trunks fans but i would like to read the stories for Vegeta and Bulma, just few chapters for how they both fall in love with each other .

Wow. What a great read. I have to confess, its been almost a decade since I've done any reading in the dbz fandom, and I recall that I passed over reading this story back then for some nonsense reason I can't remember...boy, was I missing out! You are an exceptional writer. I feel as though I have a deeper understanding of all your characters because of the depth you've given them. Their psychological interludes are fascinating and complex, and add so much to their adventures-and what adventures! I often finding myself scrolling through such sections in a lot of stories to get back to the 'plot', but I was never tempted to do so while reading this. The relationships you developed between characters are so believable and heart-felt because of their mental meanderings. The situations you place your characters in, and the events in their lives, are so well thought out and absorbing, and dont seem at all like an excuse to catalyze romance or push the characters along. I guess what I'm trying to say in this rambling review is that this felt more like reading a novel than a work of fanfiction, and I loved it! This story was a blast from the past for me, and I thank you for putting your talents into writing it. I'll definitely be visiting your other story when I have time to read it!

More plese cuz youre awesome have you ever thought about making pan pregnant

I defenitly love Trunks more than my own mom. :) You aren't alone on that one.

WOW ! *̣̣ absolutely LOVE the story. It gives me confidence in writing my own! *̣̣ ℓσνє Pan's confidence towards her uncle's death & Cαη't wait to read the next chapter !

awesome terrific magnificent great best story ever