This is astonishingly well-written, with a real eye to detail and character. I love it :D

This is totes off topic but I was listening to this song yesterday and it was like totally faxed up. Like a freaking Fax theme song the voices who sing the song even sound like Max and Fang should! Here are the lyrics but look up the song on youtube and like really connect to it.

Little Talks - Of Monsters and Men

Hey x3
I don't like walking around this old and empty house
So hold my hand i'll walk with you my dear
The stairs creep while I sleep, it's keeping me awake
It's the house telling you to close your eyes
Some days I can't even trust my self
It's killing me to see you this way
Cause though the truth may vary this ship will carry our bodies safe to shore
*Music Woo*
Hey x3
There's an old voice in my head that's holding me back
Well tell her that I miss our little talks
Soon it will be all over, and buried with our
We used to play outside when we were young, and full of life full of love
Some days I feel like I'm wrong when I am right
Your mind is playing tricks on you my dear
Cause though the truth may vary this ship will carry our bodies safe to shore
Hey
Don't listen to a word I say
Hey
The screams all sound the same
Cause though the truth may vary this ship will carry our bodies safe to shore
*Music Woo*

Your gone gone gone away I watched you disappear
All that's left is a ghost of you
Now were torn torn torn apat theres nothing we can
Just let me go we'll met again soon
No wait wait wait for me please hang around
I'll see you when I fall asleep
Hey
Don't listen to a word I say
Hey
The screams all sound the same
Hey
Cause though the truth may vary ship will carry our bodies safe to shore

Isaiah: Damn, mom I need a haircut my hair is starting to look like that Fang guys in that manga.
Hester: Oh, that Fang kid is awesome man how I wish he was my son instead of you, you sorry loser.
Fang: I am your son god dammit!
Hester: Yay, dreams do come true now, f$#* off Isaiah!
Isaiah: But mother what about me?
Hester: Butt's are for elbows why don't you go get some!
Isaiah: But I have two right here mother.
Fang: Let's make a run for it *scoops up Hester bridal style and flies off* Flock hurry!

forever alone poor hester and fang so so very alone in the world oh, well.

Dude...this is one of the best fanfics about Fang that I've ever read! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue this! Seriously, you have the characters spot on and I really love the plot of the story! Please continue it!

Whoah! That last bit was intense! Please update soon 'cause I absolutely loved it! That was pretty stupid of Fang, though. Don't bother to tell the flock that you decided to leave with your mom! THAT would just be too simple! Anywho, update, update, update! And by God I HAVE to stop using the exclemation poit key! I'm gonna wear it out! Keep 'a writing, 'cause you have serious talent.

~Sallafe

I really like this story. It's an interesting idea and the way you have written it out is really good. Everyone is in character and there are only a few little spelling mistakes that I can tell were accidental.

I want to know what happens, so can update soon, please? Why did you stop writing, anyway?

aw poor isaiah

This is probably one of the most amazing fanfics I've read so far. The suspense you create is perfect - I really couldn't stop reading for six straight chapters, and I look forward to reading more.

I love your story..but i notice that it's been a while since your last update.

Are you gonna update soon? Please do..

As for the reviews, i just wanna say that i couldn't seem to links 'Isaiah', the clone one, with the real Fang..lol..

Maybe, because they characteristic is so different..haha..

I love the story. I like how you made Fang's clone so different from him, and yet so realistic.

This is going on my Favorite Stories list!

:)

Bye!

this is great - i CANNOT wait for more. keep typing!

Wow, I love your story so much! So great. Very well written, interesting and original. Can't wait for your next chapter! Update soon!

Curses! I'm not sure why didn't tell me this had been updated. :O

But now I've read it, and I love it. The last line gave me a little chill for some reason.

Brilliant job. :) Update when you can, please. :D

YES! Another update on this story, oh yay I'm so thrilled! :D I've been waiting so long to see the switch, and here it is right here in front of me! I might need my own inhaler if I keep this up (Isaiah really needs to try some Advair), so I'll calm down. Okay, this switch was PERFECT, and please update sooner than you did last time so we can see more of what Fang's mom is like please oh please oh please! And the flashback was so cool, it explained a lot. :D