Well, to be frank, Ginny seems the kind of person who'll resort to love potions and compulsions, not Dean.

It simply sounds implausible.

If Harry knows so much about magic in all it’s forms, why the fuck doesn’t he figure out that Ginny was obliviated or optioned?

Well this chapter was fairly pointless. You turn Harry into a powerful genius and then let him stumble into the same traps as canon-Harry, taking on the same abuse because he's 'hiding'. Pfft. Boring.

If you're going to make this wandless, magical animagus, knowledgeable, shrewd, OP character, you might as well have him actually -do- something instead of simply giving sarcastic commentary, even though he's allowing himself to be tortured, manipulated, and humiliated.

You lost me in this chapter, which is unfortunate since I was enjoying the story until you made harry out to be a jerk. Why did you make Harry out to be a whore?

The story was an ok read, if we leave out the parts where you just summarize events.

So, in essence, the interactions with Fleur, Luna, Blaise, Daphne were nicely done and interesting because they were recounted in real time, and there were actual dialogues. On the other hand, the rehashing of the HBP events in a summary format was boring. At those parts, you could always do mini scenes with dialogues to show what is going on if you wanted; that would be more lively than telling us: ' X and Y talked about something and agreed on something. '

PS: I love your C2. Found loads of interesting stories in there!

Your first chapter was interesting, but this humongous flashback, while explaining things and establishing Harry' s character, was too much and too bland to just serve it in a single go.

I think it would have been better if you had broken this down in pieces, and added small flashbacks between the narrative. Not only would people find it less daunting to read then, but also the story would have an air of mystery since we would not know every single detail of Harry' s past straight away.

Anyway, that is just a personal opinion, other people might like it as it is.

Please don't abandon this!

this story must continue!

Is there any actual dialog in the rest of this story?

How long until the Daphne/Harry sex scene? (for a lack of a better word)

Well im done i hate adulterers and harry is a POS in tyhis fic. Yu write good but the plot is too bad for me.

Any chance we will see any updates? I really enjoyed this Harry, and the time you took to develop all of the characters.

Please update soon. Love how Harry said he did not love them but hoped to in the future.

we all read the petition, now get back to this awesome story!

well played by harry so far