Hey ya Adam! Yes I am still reading your fics! Here are my thoughts on story #11.

Tony a "sign language Probie" :lol:

Pet lobster Simba :lol:

Chioke & Jamie mixed up in a bank robbery! You really truly had great tension going throughout this story...loved it! That guy Shotgun/Shawn...oh how I hated him! :x Hitting & hurting Jamie so many times...I was worrying about the baby! And poor Chioke...hasn't he been thru enough? He was so cruel to that little boy!

When Chioke was released & Tony went to get him...cos he was so scared...I got all teary.

Jamie! Taking the gun! So daring! Glad it worked out.

Tony hitting Shawn...he so deserved it!

Oh no when Jamie lost the baby...that broke my heart! And then to learn poor little Chioke blames himself!

Really enjoyed this one. And I love how you write Gibbs too.

I'll try to read the next one a little quicker! :P

- Suze :D

WOW that was good

awesome story! well everything was awesome until jamie lost the baby! keep up the great work... can't wait for the next story!

oh boy! can't wait for more! poor jamie and tony and chioke. hope everything works out! continue soon!

oh no! i hope the baby is ok! continue soon!

what did ya do? plz update soon!

oh man! Continue soon! please!

jamie and the baby are gonna be okay right? plz update soon!

i hope the baby is ok

awesome chapter as usual, but i hate where u left things hanging at the end, you better update soon!

NWG

OMG jamie's gona be alright! right? plz update soon!

arg please update soon tnx!

great job! plz update soon!

wonderful as usual! i hate it when things hang in there like that but ill do my best to wait for the next chapter; coz im sure enjoying it _

NWG

awesome! can't wait 4 more!