This is hot and funny, and I really liked it. I like the way their characters interact and the way you've filled them out, building on the very little that we're shown about their lives in the movie. Their banter is especially telling, ad I love your characterization of the two. Syndrome's roleplay suggestions and Mirage's rejection of them is hilarious, as is the roleplay, especially when Syndrome breaks character to complain about dumbing himself down. It's ridiculous but still somehow sexy. I love the "Back, front, down, or up?" and "All of the above?" I like how Mirage complains about Syndrome's pseudo-innocence, when she's the one who told him to act naive in the first place. You showcase their intimacy very well.

Another fantastic piece. It put a smile right on my face.

lol, twistedly funny.

I've written and re-written thirteen different reviews for this so far, and erased each one. So I'll just let my friend do it.

EPIC.

Always,

Robert Mason

My favorite part was when Syndrome started doing the robot. I could picture it perfectly! *sigh* Even though this is het, I enjoyed it. : ) Oh, Syndrome.

Mm, yay. Excellent. I love how detailed their role-play is. Syn is a geek indeed! Anyway, I loved this.

That was good. I think you could've included a little more plot, I don't know if that's necessarily the right word. But it was still good.