absolutely beautiful

Ummm...wow
There are very few pieces which, with as little words as this, touch your heart as strongly.
The beauty of their relationship as you have portrayed is tender and amazing and whimsical and eternal.
I loved this piece...

PS: could you fill me in on who the two lovers are? for some reason it reminds me of the story in wolverine's narrative about the wolf and the moon...but i dont think that is it

Its realy sweet.I like it 3
Good work and keep going:)

Awwwwww! So cute! Short and sweet! And so mystical too!

I know Aang is the Avatar, but can he REALLY control the universe?

Very Sweet!11222222222222222222222

It was good

I really like this!

Wow that was truly amazing, nice work.

Literally crying right now. This was absolutely beautiful.

This is so beautiful.

Poetic and sweet without being overbearing. This was great. She got her wish after all and he joined her in the stars too.

Gorgeous. Beautiful writing, just so lyrical and wonderful to read.

Your ending hung onto me. Like an ending in another book I knew, the Godolphin Arabian. That one went like this

So you see, I have kept the tablet clean, it is for me and for you to write our thoughts and tributes to the King of the Wind, and the slim brown horseboy who loved him.

You have talent, your ending is the type of ending which hangs onto you, refusing to let you go, Be proud, your story She Who Danced with Water is a miracle. Keep writing.

Very sweet drabble.