Sooooo good! You captured the characters perfectly and the story was thrilling! I can’t wait to read more of your work!

Fun. I like all of the red herrings, even though there's no way we could have suspected the actual culprit and reasons.

Great story! Keep up the good work:)

man, i can't even begin to say how much i love your stories!

I love this story. I love all of your stories, but this one gets bonus points for team participation and characterization. I'm glad that you are posting your stories here- hopefully that gets you even more fans!

very good. enjoyed it a lot. particularly the lack of s/j...Sweet.

Excellent story! I felt like I was watching the show. I love Jack taking care of Daniel and wanting to kick the bad guy's butt for hurting him. Keep writing, I can't wait to read more of your stories. Bravo!

Paula

I really enjoyed this story. Keep up the good work.

Really good story. I thought Kirby was the trator, great curveballs. Enjoyed it.

Good story, certainly a different idea and nicely written. Thanks for sharing.

great story!