Reviews for Betrayal
Gasanechi chapter 19 . 9/14/2014
I hate Open endings in a story, it's like a lame excuse of a writer in his own way of saying: 'Hey, I'm abandoning this fic, coz yeah, I'm bored with it, so make up your own ending.'

Hell, even a fucking tragedy will be better than an Open ending, at least then, it ended in some form.
animeactivist chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
OMG AMAZING
Fluttershy 2059123 chapter 19 . 4/27/2014
What?! You HAVE to write an epilogue! You can not, I repeat, CAN NOT end it here! It was magically awesome, and you really need to write an epilogue to make it end for real. Great job!
sakura.souen chapter 19 . 12/9/2013
The ending is such a cliffhanger i relly loved the story, but the closure is just not complete, i mean what happens next, Where will she go? will Sasusaku ever happen? please a sequel would be awesome !
BlazingPyro606 chapter 19 . 11/19/2013
woaw woaw woaw wat happens next!
THAT CAN'T BE IT! :O
kiko280 chapter 19 . 9/28/2013
This is the end? Not to be negative or anything but it just doesn't seem like it... Maybe u could continue it?
Epic Otaku Cherry chapter 19 . 9/26/2013
I loved this story, really. I got so obsessed with it very quickly - I just adored it. The only thing that would have made it better would be an epilogue or after story or something. But I'll try to forget about since you don't want to do it - if I think about it it'll just drive me crazy because it's not going to happen.

Anyway, I loved this.

Definitely one of my top favorite stories.

-Cherry
hama431 chapter 19 . 8/28/2013
will there a sequel
mxn1fan chapter 19 . 7/26/2013
I LOVE sakura, but in this, I HATED HER! She's so stupid, and it irritates me so much at how dumb and bad she is at lying! BUT I LOVE THE STORY!
Guest chapter 19 . 1/13/2013
I personally hate the ending. Also sakura is supposedly intelligent yet u make her seem stupid. The ending and mixed with the overview of the characters personality made me think the story was horrible when it came to the end
LilithiaRW chapter 9 . 12/27/2012
Wow. Sakura is really stupid in this one. I'm sorry, but her lies suck and she's making it way too easy for people to tell she is lying.
PRiNCESS SLAYER o1o chapter 19 . 12/8/2012
aww . No sequel .? :'(
YuYoLS chapter 19 . 8/8/2012
So...this is it? I really want to know what happens next! I like evilness in you :) its a great story haha that's why u hav to continue
willam and jack and jake chapter 19 . 12/31/2011
great fan fic
willam and jack and jake chapter 18 . 12/31/2011
nice to both of you
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