I really liked it but ron and hermione were a bit out of character

uuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhh that was cute short and awesome

That is a good kissing scene. Well done.

aw this was cute i liked it a lot

Did you get that from Elf? I love that movie though, and that moment is my favorite. Nicely done.

Bookish0278

aw that was cute.

did u get tht from the movie Elf, when their ice skating? cuz thats like the same scene. u coulda done it subconciously tho. i do tht sumtimes. it was even cuter as ron and hermione tho!

Nice one.

Really, it shows that a good story does not need to span a dozen chapters.

Wel done and keep writing.

Elfwarden

Very sweet...I love these touching one-shots!