aww..

Aww. So fluffy and cute.

This is probably my favourite Buri/Raoul one-shot I've ever read. It's wonderfully sexy and funny and you write both of them just perfectly. Please write more Buri/Raoul in the future.

I loved that! not as much as your 50 KelDom themes, which is my favorite fanfic EVER!, but this is a close second! you should TOTALLY write more romance fics! - thay are so good!

If you need more emcouragement, there is a random person, somewhere in the world who is now obsessed with your writing!:)

aw...thats so fluffy...like bunnies...also, I'm glad that I'm not the only person that uses the word 'shmexy'! :)

Aww - i love this little story. I think you should write more about Raoul and Buri - you have their characterisation so accurate. I didn't get the whole Dom and the flagpole thing though.

love it...a sequel about raoul and biri hooking dom and kel up maybe? plz?

Haha! In Wyldon's office! haha! And bite marks? Well she does work with horses, she could 'blame' them! Genius! Very, very, very (I could continue saying very but I shant, I could go on for ever!) funny!

aww, this is sweet!

Heh. Cute. Adorable. Definitely see that happening.

Cute! That was both a, adorable, and b, funny. I loved the part of "Cold, Scanran winters and various uses of flagpoles." Hehe.

I found two 'technical' grammar things, just to point out. (You said in your profile you'd like them pointed out.)

In the second line of the story, you say '...resettling her head on his chest. Neither am I."' You just forgot quotation marks before Neither, nothing much. The second thing is 12 lines down, 'warm' is in a sentence of it's own. The same thing happened to me, it was my darn document manager which is out to kill me, I swear.

But either way, nothing big, and I herby put this on my faves list. Post a sequel! I would LOVELOVELOVE to hear how Raoul gets Kel and Dom together! That would be awsome! (Shameless KD shipper here.)So keep writing!

-Phoenix

Aww, so cute! I don't "go" for fluff but this is shamelessly ADO-WEE-BAL.

PS: I bet you've coined up the word "shmexy" haven't you?

Ah wow, this is so good too! I can't really think of anything else to say!

Pure shameless fluff. cute. Great writing. I love this pairing.

i absolutely adore fluff...and that was extremely fluffy :D

keep writing