So creepy! You nailed her voice; the interested, curious, but still sort of detached musings. Just - creepy! Also, I loved it :-)

Forgive me but...YOU SICK SADISTIC BASTARD! I love you.

Now that that's out of my system, I can give you a real review!

I loved your ingenius idea of giving the Queen the point of view. It was fantastic indeed. I don't remember which bit, but it had a second of loopholeishness...nevermind my yammering. I really, honest to God, loved it.

much love and cookies,

everloyal~

Wow, that is spooky and very well written. Thanks for sharing :)

YAY! Awesome story. I enjoyed reading it.

*Huggles John* .

wow this is really good :D i love it. *favs*

Oh...dark and gorgeous. It's well written and very striking and I like it. :)

great job! pretty scary though.. she has a crush on him.. lol!

Tight and compact, but with terrific descriptive imagery. Really establishes a sense of the setting. Nice use of wording and structure.

Brilliantly written, sort of sadistic fic! I totally loved the Queen’s POV in this one, great.

Stunning story, got me hooked within the instant. Keep it coming. Thanks!

Wow. That was dark and poetic and beautiful. A very interesting take on the Wraith and I love how you have written the Queen's POV - it feels very real and believable.

Wow, that was intense! Loved it!

Very creepy Shep-whump! :D Bravo!

Whoa, intense.

That was great! Poor John!

Awesome fic! ;) Poor Johnny, tortured by the wraith. Amazing that it was in the queen's POV...bloodthirsty psycho-elf-wannabe, isn't she? lol ;)