snicker Oh, I could so see that...

lol. yay! best line ever: "it’s official: the Sohma clan has unearthed another bishonen. Aya will be so proud." xD

second best line: “Probably. Guess we’ll have to take you over to Sensei’s house so Yuki can teach you how to stay alive with a fanclub.”

yay for rabid fangirls! poor momiji...

ja ne!

mimi-chan

That was just to hilarious! One thing I can say I liked about the story was how you kept the characters, well, in character and that you stuck to the fact that Momiji was quite attractive wearing a boy's uniform, just like it said in the manga. NIce job, keep it up!

this is good, could you write more? i'd like to see what happens after school when they go to shigure's house. I'd also love to see the dealing with fangirls lesson.

please write more.

I like it alot

Ha ha, it's so funny! Momiji really looks cute in a boy's uniform, dosen't he? Aw . . .

Very well written, i must say! You're good at showing what's going on, rather than telling, and i really like the plot as well! Momiji and Haru are not at all OC, and that's a very good thing, and another reason why your story is so likable!

Well . . . good job on the story, and continue writing!

That was so funny!

Iam definately one of those fangirls...

Knowing their school, that's probably a very accurate depiction of what happened. Love the ending xD

Soo funny. It's really cute too. You did an excelent job. I love that last line. :}

LMFAO!LOL!awesomes!XDXDXD